I like the potential for growth in the story and character design, looking forward to see how the adventure unfolds.
Hope he gets the chance to get stronger and stronger as explores the world in this new exciting time.
Everyone, you should read this wonderful novel!!
The novel possesses a distinct story world and an eccentric system that tries to force the shy, introverted hero to be the future ruler of the world !! The novel easily ranks in my top ten books that I've read on this app.
I am sure you will not regret reading it
I reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy love the story the chracters are great the world build is good to keep up the good work.
This is honestly the first thing I’ve read in a while that has kept me super interested since Rick Riordan put out his Percy Jackson series and The Lost Hero series. Really good work can’t wait for more. It’s like watching a new TV show that you are super into and you don’t want to wait for a new episode to come out. You just want it to be out already.
SO FREAKING GOOD!!!!!! This is gonna have you at the edge of your seating wanting more! One chapter a day isn’t enough ITS THAT GOOD
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The Prequel to the first ever contracted original novel on the sight has everything you've come to expect from Last Wish System, well thought out lovable characters, Amazing world building, believable interactions, a powerful system guiding the main hero but making him do the work to unlock more. A bit of mystery, a lot of revenge, what's not to like?? Come join the adventures of Shiba, Eini and Lina as they grow, learn, loose and win.
Life lessons learnt. Very instructive and educational in piece . I am using the lessons learnt to teach and enlighten my children. Experience they say is the best teacher. If you aren't patient enough you end up on the wrong side of life
The premise is simple, yet interesting and fun. The magical realism elements really work. Keep up the good work author, good stuff for sure.
Seriously disappointing. Contrived and forced "hardship" plot points. The one that made me stop reading was when the author decides to write that the fate fragment decided to do something that will forever prevent the MC from being able to use his fate powers and doesn't tell him until she gets called out by someone else,, which makes the fate fragment useless, conniving trash. It was a completely idiotic plot point, and ruined the entire plot and made me immediately despise the character which pretty much ruins the entire story since she's the second most important character after the MC.
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This cliche trash gets picked instead of dawn of a new era?!!!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!? Editors choice fucking sucks, the people on this site have **** taste, god of fucking fishing got chosen over it