Alright my third iteration lol,
This novel is not the usual run of the mill cultivation novel you see out there. MC won't just blindly slaughter or save every dog and chickens he sees on the road lol.
Pros -
1. A collected, mature(not beta) and playful MC who is not too cold that his face looks like a frozen block of ice without any expressions despite his tragic past.
2. Interesting and entertaining story and plot lines that would keep you guys on edge and want to read more. The plot won't be simply about leveling up and jumping to higher realms like other novels but there would be gripping, dramatic and heart wrenching events.
3. MC's girls won't be two dimensional nor would they be left behind and forgotten. They each play a important role in the story. The Romance has and will be well fleshed out unlike usual novels where MC simply chances upon a beauty and insta meet and have snu-snu.
4. The world building has been structured properly and the power levels explained(glossary also included). MC's powers are intriguing(Necromancy included oops spoiler) and not cliched. It would be fun for you guys to see how he is going to use them.
5. I think the writing quality is at least satisfactory that won't bore holes in one's brain. Till at most Chap 80, there might be elementary mistakes and small grammatical mistakes, but trust me I will edit it as soon as I get the time. First time writing so can't help it.
Cons -
1. Please somehow hold on till chap 20 as I feel like I might have tried to convey the information in a poor way. Maybe some might not feel that way but for those who does, I can say that you won't regret if u read on after chap 40.
2. The story might seem like a slow start since I wanted to build up the world first and convey it to readers. Maybe this might not have been the best way but it does pick up pace from chap 50 onwards. Again this depends on one's perspective while some might feel the pace is fine.
3. I don't know if this is a con or what...but some might feel the mysteries are too annoying or something like that. But please be patient as they are revealed along with the plot and you guys won't regret reading further. Where's the fun if all the mysteries are shown to you all at the beginning of the story itself?
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Finally, thank you for taking the time to at least look at my novel and reading it. Also, appreciate all the powerstones and support you guys are giving me :D
P.S (Harem haters pls avoid this novel and don't post a review saying that you hate harem since I already mentioned it in the tags, ty)
The writing in the story could do better but if you comment on the story the auther will reply or like it,so if you ever see a mistake just comment it to help the auther out.The auther updates frequently with chapters.Since the auther works so hard leave a lil comment here and there to help keep the auther motivated! They write two stories so I know they must be overwhelmed at times
The only gripe I have with the story is how there is not enough of it. Would recomend to anyone.............................................
Hello translator, are you willing to translate this? I recently read that novels that aren't picked in the Trial Read can choose to continue to translate it, just like what the translator of Almighty Virtual Game Designer did. But the problem is, they aren't paid. Meaning, translators can only get money through unlocking chapters with coins. There are many (?) fans who are willing to support you, like me, using my other premium account. I very like this novel like others (?)
(btw.this is a question: to the translator or fellow readers?
I really love the way this book is coming along!
Its super refreshing and a good read!
Ive always had a thing for the necromancer area and them being a proper MC that isnt just outright evil but is caculatiing and had a plan. I really do enjoy the book!
thanks for the effort author-san
I've seen this novel in another app, the author is new but he updates quickly and keeps on improving! Would love to see this complete. Waiting for more updates, we'll see how it goes.
P.S. I still really want ArcherxAsher to happen lol
I'm greatly enjoying what the first opening chapters have brought. The investment for the characters haven't peeked yet for me, as is, I do look forward on that changing. Same for world build. Overall, this has been a neat look and I can't wait to come back for more.
What a fun new world to enter, upon first few chapters! The action is continuous, and the dialogue snappy. I'm looking forward to new chapters as they come out.
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Amazing novels and the author is a very interactive in the comments and makes it enjoyable . This is not a translation but an original novel. The mc is a cautious person but not so much that it gets annoying . The mc is a fun joyful person and also his family is not dead . He does not blush or be embarrassed about romantic things and likes to flirt with his senior sister.Just give the first 10 chapters a try
My gosh, your writing is explicit and the background is well explained. The characters were well taken care of. Your command of language is impeccable... I will save and read from the app to give chapter and paragraph reviews..nice job...