story premise is good but stop using ai to write the novel , it gets irritating to read
The writing style here is really creative and unique, while the story has a nice tempo to it-- all in the present tense. So it feels like you're right in the moment with the characters. It's really refreshing. I think the story and character development needs some work, but it's really pulling together with the more chapters that come out. Good world building too! Also, the author seems to be putting out a lot of chapters in a short span of time, so looking forward to making this one of my usuals!
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Currently, I feel like each of the characters have their own way of living. also, the concept of luck is an amazing idea. absolute genius of an author HAHAHA
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this is my first time ever seeing a novel with the MC as a panda. I know pandas are one of the strongest type of bears and biggest and laziest.
A rubbish novel with a vulgar hero, there is no evil, a deceptive title.A rubbish novel with a vulgar hero, there is no evil, a deceptive titleA rubbish novel with a vulgar hero, there is no evil, a deceptive title
good but author needs to improve of fight scenes like he said and well idk how to say this but umm expand the cast or whatever( has just finished volume 1)
struggled to make it through the first chapter. this story needs alot of work and needs a over haul on both characters and world view building and development.
Guys this novel is literally on the level of a printed novel the character development is flawless its a bit darker than most novels you will encounter but it really drags out that excitement and on edge feeling cause you just worry about mc and the character are so well fleshed that everything they do has a reason and everyone has a motive where its not simply that they are dicks so the villains have an amazing depth to them that makes you understand them instead of simply hate them for their actions and if you like game of thrones you should give this a try from the way its developing i think courtyard politics is gonna be important and its not gonna be like normal novels where politics is important for two seconds before they just go back to survival of the fittest and mc just has a silver tongue and flawless analytical ability you need to give this a read if youre a fan of well written stories
Well I am the author, so I will obviously be praising my own novel.Anyway, before you read my novel, I would like to explain some of the characters and background of the novel.The main character is Tang Yin. I prefer evil/villian main characters. Therefore, Tang Yin had been portrayed as a devil who only cares about himself and Xiao Fei. (If you decide to read the novel, you will find out who she is.) He will do anything that suits him, including killing innocent people for his own gain. He is similar to Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity.The background is a traditional ancient Chinese setting, so basically a wuxia or xianxia cultivation novel. However, most mc in wuxia novels are righteous and have a harem. I don't want any of that, i want the main character to focus solely on himself and Xiao Fei. In my opinion, the writing quality is very good. This is my first novel, so there may be a few minor grammar or spelling mistakes. Please forgive me on this aspect. The way I write has been shaped by the various novels I have read. These novels are: Reverend Insanity, Monster Paradise, Let Me Game In Peace, Warlock Of The Magus World, Birth Of Demonic Sword, Pursuit Of The Truth, Renegade Immortal, A Record Of A Mortals Journey To Immortality, Martial Peak, Bloodline System. There are a few more, but i cant remember.Also I will be releasing at least 2 chapters a day, sometimes a chapter or two extra if I have a lot of time and get immersed in writing.The story development is alright in my opinion. There is only one plot with an occasional plot twist here and there. There are no 2 plots mixed in together as I thought it might get confusing. If there is any type of plot you would like me direct some of my novel to, please let me know and if i find it feasible, ill implement it in the novel.If there are any mistakes or suggestions you would like to notify me off, I will be all ears. Thanks for reading this comment.