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IT's amazing how people are reviewing this like they have finished the story when this has LITERALLY been copied and pasted from WW. But in all honesty, this is one of the BEST work I have ever read and I must give it 5/5.
Extreme low quality translation. I don't know if it is an editing mistake but the MC is a narcissist who only cares about flaunting his looks.
Not immersive, girls have the same personality when talking. To much bluntness when talking abou segs, expecially to someone mc just met. Not much of a challenge when getting girls as they all want a piece of mc even when they first saw him. Even a its a 999... yrs old Vgin will gladly open her cat for mc when they first met. lol
Overall; not immersive, poor writing, cringe dialogue, a ‘somewhat’ stupid/ignorant mc, no thrill/wish fulfillment and a good story, just need a reread and editing.
Everything so far in the book is cool and character development holds no problems! Overall this book is one of the best and deserves its position in the ranking! The updates are also stable and you barely ever see a stop in 'em. So read this book and it's worth it.
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So far the progress is not bad, the pace is slow, and you have to build a good and realistic relationship between him and his harem. I hope you don't rewrite this novel for the fourth time. Good luck...
It's starting to get interesting, but the updates are too little, need more chapters! Also would appreciate a smexy cover page, it would boost ratings if done well and attract more readers. Potentially good novel and the whole protagonist smiting theme is great! Rob the pu$$ies from the damn protagonists and make harem plz!
I'm not going to read it because it looks like it won't please me, I just stopped by when I noticed how much the title and synopsis are so inconsistent with the cover.
l am going to keep rating this book because tis grate jskjgiqkjdyjhriziueghrjdjuzay7yeyw57aoysyzyjqgdxtsyukq97yrtsyhwjx8almhfhcinwnNJyYtwt26