It's a pretty bleh story. The writing isn't so great and although that is understandable for non native speakers, I'd have to say that the lack of character development, plot, and world design especially ruin it. A recent trend has been sloppily throwing things from popular fiction into a system and making the MC OP. It's easy to do, but the outcome absolutely sucks especially if there is no good contextual world and plot development. And the MC? An okay choice but the flawness of his emotions and personality are serious, making him a flat one dimensional "edgy" ****.I'm not really going to talk about OPness and realism as novels vary in the flavor, mood and focus. Novels with OP systems usually compensate the lack of rich plot with character development or humor. Author needs to find some aspect that is their own, that they can maximize the appeal of to the readers.My suggestion would be to go back and produce a coherent plot, flesh out the characters by 500%, and most of all, at least describe the things and "evolutions" with enough depth so that it isn't just "oh hey, I had X tool which conveniently solves this current problem." I think the merit of the novel currently is exploration, specifically with what is the next evolutions? This definitely could be a possible way of improving the novel, and I leave it up to the author to try and improve it in his own way.
This book is one of the best in its particular genre .IT is so godddamn funny. Love the comedy. It is great.I love the chemistry between the ml and FL. It is one of those novels where you can just shut off your brain and laugh at how stupid and awesome everything is. I recommend it. please please please get selected
Keep your passion in writing burning. Keep writing and inspire others through your story. I am quite fascinating to see you have use some Filipino cultures and setting here. I love it.
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I'm really happy for the new chapter,though I didn't like the part where he tries to match the protagonist but i really like it , thanks for new chapter
I read till 50 chap and I tell you it's Awesome.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,...,.,.,.,.,.,.,,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.
Sorry to say it but it's ALWAYS the same story in Chinese novel.It's filled with cliches and here we don't have anything new.If there are people who like this kind of novel please answer me because I kinda don't understand how it is a top novel within webnovel ranking.
Author I have been looking for authors like you where have you been all this time. My name is Daoist370160 I truly like your novel. You have an awesome sense of humor. But I would truly appreciate if you improved your English, which I know will take time. I have made quite a few comments in a few chapters and every single one of them are edits on how the sentence could be better and sound better to read. I forgot which chapters I made the edits on but I there are quite a few edits that I commented next to each line which I wish you would edit. I am really happy with the novel and would like to wish you luck with the novel and your future writing career. I wish this novel would reach more than 2000 chapter and be among great novels like mortal journey to immortality, renegade immortal and the lord of mysteries. Good luck again
Website : qidian china Views : 13.75 million Rating : 8.0(486) Chapters : 696Status : completed Word count : 2.35 million author rank : platinum
Hm, although it is wish fulfillment which has been quite saturated across the board recently. The saturation is 99% terrible novels, either by plot or writing quality. Although, this follows a fairly cliche idea the writing is generally pretty good. For that reason I give it a good review, also there is a lack of modern setting wish fulfillment novels, particularly well written one, based on simple grammar alone. So Good job author.
Ahh poor MC! I felt bad for him... He was just trying to protect his... um... ahem!And this writing style is so nice the novel is also fun to read. good work author!