PancakesWitch
I am the bone of my exp,
Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood,
I've created over thousand useless reviews,
Unknown to death, nor known to life,
Have withstood my pain to write many comments,
Yet those hands will never hold anything,
Thus, as I pray ...
Unlimited Exp Works
i really like the novel, altough i'm critial in some comments i still like it very much, the only big problem is that the update is super slow
Another novel that past the paywall not only becomes worse, it's straight up unreadable
Rated it 5 so people would read it. Great story, slow paced, just my cup of tea. But the translation is total garbage tho. It’s borderline MTL.
Barely a few chapters out before they got locked. Chapters also have mediocre grammer, making the read not as smooth...................................
definitely a pancakeswitch novel,need I say more???????????????????????????????????????????????
honestly everything was good till I reached ch14.....i just can't read anymore of that chapter. i expected a cool headed mc. atleast not a perv,that's what I think the direction he's going in lookin at 'the experiment'. just please don't rush the story for lemons bruh. dropping it until I get convinced otherwiseEnglish is my second language so sorry for the grammar
Good novel but ruined by the mtl english
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Great Novel the only thing needed is an editor since it takes up to 3 tries to understand some sentences which really disrupts the reading flow
I've read the Translations. It's funny, interesting and it's relieving MC is OP enough to overcome every situation. What people find appealing about MC is that he's not a hypocrite self-righteous person. He kills and knows why.
I can also sense some racism along the way..
Honestly, it's still to soon to judge anything. As the World Building is terrible! and I can't make heads or tails of it. First, it seems like Modern Day, but then it's like 1920's steampunk, add fantasy-races on top of that. The Cultivation is to messed up.
If you've read Novels like "Way of the Devil" Where Cultivation is Secondary and based more around Mortal life. It's like a Wuxia in a way.
I can't judge anything by the Romance but so far I don't like it as MC personality is active and they are too meek so they just don't make a good match to me. It'd been nicer if it was a more of a exciting girl.
Hey, this is author-san ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )
I'm here to make an honest review of my story ( ̄^ ̄)ゞ First of, the writing quality is average as there is no editor and English is not my first language. You wouldn't read an incomprehensible novel, trust me. It's easy to read and it doesn't have any obvious grammatical errors. I might have a few typos tho ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=┌(; ̄◇ ̄)┘
Nonetheless, this baby of mine is an interesting one. Read the first five chapters and you'll see it's not like other novels. It's hard to go through unknown areas of imagination and I don't know where this will take me, but let's hope it's an interesting journey. Please enjoy. ( ̄▽ ̄;)
It would be a great story if there are more chapters. Until now it is a goog and unique beginning and setting and has the potential to be interesting for a long time.
