To be honest the story seemed to have a lot of potential but as I kept reading the more annoyed I got with how slowly the story was developing, the worst part is that so far there are 9 Main characters which is the biggest reason for the slow development of the story, I love that there are 9 of them since they all have their unique journey to go through as well as different powers and fights as well as specialties but that caused the story to develop at an extremely slow pace. I already caught up with the story to chap 775 but I feel as if I only ready 100 chapters worth of actual content. It feels like I’m watching Naruto all over again it’s show being 90% fillers.
it starts very good characters are nice and the world building gives a nice adventure like feeling.My problems lie in the new world arc if you want to read my complains be careful . SPOILER!!!I dont like everything after that midle age arc because of diffrent reasons:-The nwe world arc feels slow-The Vampires are sudenly nerfed after the begining of the new world arc.-The main Character begins a colection of meaningless activities that become boring over time after entering the new world arc.-The main character choses to visit a school rather than trying to find the lost friend that is likely used for expirimenting.
Mc has to constantly show disdain for anything feminine or else he will shrivel up and cease to exist. Exhausting.
to counter those fake ratings. I rate it harsher than usual. First off the author doesn't really how to write with believable setting and characters. Moreover this novel full of nonsensical scientific and cultural issue. biggest downside outright racism and spreading false information (or more like lying) about our humanity's history and culture.
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
The only reason I am reviewing is because webnovel has yet to pick this book up over the generic garbage Monster Transmuter. I have only read 60 chapters but that much is enough to assure one that the author actually gave a lot of thought before writing and not simply throws the cliches at the readers.
The mc is very likable and stands out from the generic cold blooded rebirth mc. The other characters have been yet to be fully fleshed out but they are intriguing until now. The plot is clever and has plenty of humour. Since the mc is very thorough in his actions, the plot armour doesn't have to save the day everytime. World background till now is honestly not something top notch especially for a non Chinese reader but well this has only started.
Please contribute to this novel and push it to the voting zone. I don't want to take the dark path for this novel (yet).
nice update days
It's ok, for naw its just a copy of all novels mmorpg -> going beck in time.
For naw(40chp) its 100% plot armor.
Mc cash -> his dad is reach.
Mc power -> he knows future.
Mc status-> he is given fame because he knows future and can gain first clears on achievements (fame converts to his status as a Viscount).
Mc lv -> his men will lv him up, or the guards he hired thx to "viscount" status will.
For naw there Is nothing that MC did that define him or his personality.
There is a lot of status screens(lv, stats, skills) so if you buy a chapters there is a risk of buying a stats sheet.
I don't think author should ask for $$$ before he even let us know MC. For naw(40chp) its just world building and its a copy of all other "mc goes beck and know it all".
Im droping this nowel since im unwilling to spend $ without knowing what im paying for (1-40 is not worth $).
Here we go again.
Look at the review and you will see tons of idiot calling MC is plagiarizing.
This is just fiction, get a life if you have time criticizing a fictionally character.
If you don’t agree to me then don’t reply to me, I don’t want to get contaminated by your stupidly.
good story only question is if the anthor gonna add more? because I would love that and please let me know if you can.
thx very much and hope you keep writing more wonderful storys
I see. So there will be misunderstandings as he is an emperor in disguise therefore the MC will be secretly hiding how big his d!ck will be?
I'm down.
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