The writing quality is abysmal to the point where I have read machine translations that made more sense. The story seems to be all over the place and characters are quite bland the author desperately needs someone to edit past chapters.
The concept is ok, and the world background is cliche. MC unlocks the soldiers, but apart from the beginning dungeon doesn't use them. The character design is 2-D and the concept of unlocking talents is stupid. the only good thing about this novel is the above mediocre translation quality. The only thing I recommend is not reading this book.
it's kinda weird. with a lot of simps. but looks like his gun skills can directly be used in the real world so maybe he can join the army or something.
I didn't think I was going to like this novel
oh how wrong I was
I loved every chapter and I honestly can't wait to read all of them as soon as they get released
Come on start this already I’am reall hooked by the synopsis and the tile so pretty pls start translating this already. Can’t wait anymore to see this in the next novels to be translated.
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The plot development iS good one. I hope the author is able top continue this work and provide a unique arc to the story. can't wait to read more./
Nice plot. Would recommend it to anyone who likes reading, looking forward to the next chapter. You did a good job, author. Keep it up.
If you just came from a heavy and upsetting novel this is a great one to pick up your mood.
I love the story and characters. The novel is light and refreshing without very much drama or things that could make you sad.I hope that this novel will get picked back up again because I really enjoyed the chapters which have been made so far.
it's not hard to find overlord on the internet, why don't you try writing fanfiction? I am a hardcore fan of overlord, and I look forward to reading your original work.
This story feels rushed I and I believe others would be able to enjoy this story more if you, the author, put more time working on the base of your story. It has an interesting plot that personally interested me but from what I have read is being, and I mean well when saying this, terribly executed. The utter lack of details of the power system is annoying one chapter the mc is level 10 the next he saying he's basically level 25, which would be cool in all if we were told what he did to get to that level. We never see the mc fight like ever. The mc has a master class that allows to forcibly enslave from what we know any being and he gets 50% exp from their kills but we never get told how much exp a being gives which in turn just makes it feel like the author just levels them up conveniently. It is also said that the levels get increasingly hard to level up after certain marks for instance at level 25 it get harder and then 50 and so and so forth but the mc and his slaves seem to be leveling up even faster than before. I also seen that the author planned this story all the way up to volume 9 which I was originally excited about but you honestly wouldn't be able to tell if he just thought of on the spot none of this story seems well thought out. And don't even get me started on the fact that every interaction the mc has is with a girl and they conveniently have amazing potential. I have seen people put more effort into fanfics than this story and I'm not trying to discredit the author but its just what I get when I read your story. Its a pure wishfulfilment story. The author put most of his effort into describing his characters which doesn't matter if their setting is a blank canvas.
I loved the way of writing and the actions in this novel and I am looking forward to the rest of the chapters to upload to read it, it is really interesting and it deserves 5 stars