PancakesWitch
Hi guys, the image you are seeing is Elementals Apex Mode of our protagonist. I will upload these type pictures in the novel. So please check comments after u read each chapter. Please give me your review for the novel development and to reach this novel to more.
This story can be considered as the typical reincarcation story having an mc that is so OP. But what I like of this story, is that although the mc interacts with a lot of female characters, he is loyal to one woman (no to harem for me). Also, even though he is so OP, I love how the author inserted "human-like" to his character. Despite being seen as an OP mc, he is still very practical and hard-working.
not bad author I will give your book a chance
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(Copy and pasted from my NU review)
This novel is extremely good with what it is. The plot is really bad, but it is a really good read.
Update: Raws, 255 I originally thought that this novel was a decent read. Then it got repetitive. New cookie cutter girl swoons, ofc Ling ran ignores. Repeat. Nothing new.
My breaking point is Yu Yuan. How do you get such a dumb character in the novel??? They try to interject awkwardly into situations and she is brain dead in her interactions. The breaking point of that breaking point is Ling Ran and his patriotism.
There is no "China is number one" kind of oneupsmanship in medicine. We are all working to a common goal, regardless of nationality. It is extremely obvious, and it feels like colonialism 2.0, at least the way that the author describes it. Ling Ran sticks with the same hospital, even though HE KNOWS HE IS LIMITED BY THE NUMBER OF BEDS. So leave for gods sake. Mayo clinic, Shanghai foot, a lot of good places would accept him.
Why does he want to be a 'world class doctor', when he stays in the chinese equivalent of the backwaters of Alabama? Tian Hao too. She is a 3rd gen rich girl who just wants to win over Ling Ran. Except she has negative brain cells. B_tch please. I am trying to enjoy the novel and all you can do is interject and add random bullcr*p. I don't care if you drive a Rolls Royce today, and a Bentley tomorrow.
The only good part was Meng Leyao. Jeez, a woman who is more normal than the rest, who doesn't immediately get wet after seeing Ling Ran, except she disappears for 100 chapters. The ticket system encourages high word count, which comes at the expense of quality.
Thank you for listening to my ted talk. /Rant
Lin Fan is this same with Lin Fan of The Strongest System?? Well if it is definitely looking forward on this one considering TSS. Giving it 5 star just to show my support on this one.
the story is not bad, very entertaining.
the story is not bad, very entertaining.
the story is not bad, very entertaining.
the story is not bad, very entertaining.
The story is pretty good. One of the better ones among Chinese Novels. But it has its own collection of problems.
Translation : It is readable, but many sentences have lost their meaning among translation. Some words are misinterpreted, while others are in wrong place. I am not sure, whether it's translation error or writing error.
For example, the story loves to use the term devilish to describe anything above average. Devilish talent, devilish beast, devilish tongue. Honestly, the terms should have been monstrous and not devilish.
Similarly, I remember reading a chapter ( when he goes to Murong Xus family, before the five talents come.) The world servile has been used. MC looked at him in servility or something. Once again, wrong verb. MC didn't give a **** about him.
Their are several such instances where wrong terminology has been used. From around chapter 400-500, divine weapons and divine dao has been replaced with Supreme Dao and weapons, which is causing confusion. Then their is the cultivation level, many times the levels have been changed or mixed. Where Profound should be used, they have used Perfect and so on. Plus cultivation level is not described clearly, especially the Mysterious Exquisite level.
Anyway, talking about characters. I am taking western novels such as those by Sanderson, Martin, archer and Rothfuss. Although an unfavorable yardstick, it's a wasted effort if I compare CN with CN novels.
It's okay. His aspirations are rather vague and sudden. They lack motivation and are extremely forced. His love life is sudden. How can three meetings turn into a life long love commitment, is something I can't fathom.
The world building... Difficult to comment. Until ch 650 we have just gone over the Human and Xuan Yuan Mound. Several forbidden areas are still left. Despite that, from what I can see, the world building is rather lack luster. The politics is vague and completely depended in that regions owner and his backing. The economy is not even mentioned. The power division is also rather confusing. I don't expect something of Martin's level, but at least something?
GO see Thriller Paradise intermediately!
TO my surprise, when my friends recommend this book
MY first idea is like i don't like thriller
DESCRIPTION part, though, tells me it's not about thriller
SEE the content of the book i decided to read it
THE story in the book really grabbed me
NEW characters are indeed attractive
SITE Qi really did something well on translating this book
Please read this comment carefully and dont tell everyone else you found a good book.
My Grandfather smoked his whole life. I was about 10 years old when my mother said to him, 'If you ever want to see your grandchildren graduate, you have to stop immediately.'. Tears welled up in his eyes when he realized what exactly was at stake. He gave it up immediately. Three years later he died of lung cancer. It was really sad and destroyed me. My mother said to me- 'Don't ever smoke. Please don't put your family through what your Grandfather put us through." I agreed. At 28, I have never touched a cigarette. I must say, I feel a very slight sense of regret for never having done it, because this novel gave me cancer anyway.
Ok I’ve got to admit that I’m a fan!!! I’ve tried reading a few gaming novels on WN, but yours is the first one I could seriously read. Your writing style is wonderful, and there weren’t any errors that I could pick up on. The dialogue also felt natural, and with the way you crafted Hao, it’s easy to see who he is and understand where he’s coming from. Great work!!!
How many chapter per week/day. ............................................................................
