IMO this is a pretty laidback story. Not a serious-type story. Knowing that its a fun story to read. At least it wont be a waste of time
Its overall a good novel!
Its overall a good novel!
Its overall a good novel!
Its overall a good novel!
Its overall a good novel!
Its overall a good novel!
Its overall a good novel!
Its overall a good novel!
the story has a strong grip on its character and clear plot, two strong base to make a good story.
characters are fun to be around with. like RIN TIN TIN, i want to see how she further would take the matter. and poor MC hope he gain the power enough to rule. best of luck author
Really liked the 'Your Choice' thing going on, extremely unique if i do say so myself. Moreover, the choice of words is commendable and I really like how the story makes the reader feel as if they are in the world. Although only a few chapters have been uploaded, the quality and writing style is really good. Keep it up!
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The novel is from the psychological type, just my cup of tea. The author spends time to unravel concepts and explain how "misfortune" accumulates in one's life - which also can expand beyond and catch in its web other victims. One can think of consequentialism. This is a very realistic story. People may see it as slow-paced, but I'd like to say that good stuff comes slow. (;
The only thing I dislike is the overuse of exclamation marks.
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fantastic I love this book this has been by far the best read I would recommend this book author could you please open more chapters for us you have my full support enjoy your gift
I'm still in chapter 7 so I cannot say anything about this however the concept is interesting. Also I like the MC having this ppersonality. Please don't drop the story Author-san
hey Mr author is there going to be any more updates? don't take my prey away from me it's the only enjoyment I have left... when are you going to give me another update?
Interesting system novel. The author gives plenty of information about the character’s stats so that you never need to feel lost or guess. The MC is likable and, as may be expected, wants to be the best. It’s a fun, easy read. Give it a try!
writing quality is amazing and the characters are very lovable and stand out on their own. The description of the world, characters, and monsters are also very well done. The character interactions feel natural and the mc also feels realistic even in a fantasy world. Overall a very enjoyable novel that is definitely worth a read