The novel was pretty interesting and it had potential but the quality is trash. First, they say that it's a VR game but in just a few chapters, it turned into a pc game. Character is max level but his stats are at the basic 10. So does this mean that this is a equipment based game? A beginner buy op equipment and then soars to the heavens?
The story is good. There are some holes in the plot, but it doesn't affect the whole story, so it's ignoreable. I'm using Google translator, I can't assess the quality of the translation.
Translation Quality: Is okay for the most part, but there are a few lines that do feel out of place. However, with the context of it being a trial read then it’s pretty good.
Stability of Updates: I’m sure you guys know the drill by now.
Story Development: I’d say don’t judge this story based on the description, because it’s not very accurate.
What is true: yes, he was a Godking* and he did die and reincarnate.
What’s not true: that he can’t cultivate and chose to nurture disciples instead. As far as his nine disciples are concerned; they seem to have been his disciples while he was a Godking.
That said I do find the premise of this story and cultivation system to be plenty interesting. I do like the fact that the sect he reincarnated into isn’t some random weakest sect, in the weakest location, but one he had established thousands of years ago before ascending. As a result sect development is one of core plots of this novel, which is a sub genre I’m personally a big fan off.
Of course it’s not devoid of the typical cliches of this genre, but again I’d say the premise of this novel and it’s cultivation system is enough to give a try regardless.
Edit:
*the term in the actual translation seems to differ; I’m not sure if his actual rank was an Immortal King or not, but I left it as Godking for similicity’s sake.
Also I’ve rated it 5 stars because:
A. It’s not been westernized.
B. To counterbalance reviews made by some very biased people who haven’t even actually read the novel.
Good novel keep the good work and thank you for your hard work <3
HI, Author here! Shamelessly reviewing his work the second time after completing one month. Of course, I rated it for 5. But if you have free time and nothing to do, try to peek and read in this novel. Maybe what you’re looking for is here.
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The greatness of this novel cannot be found in the early chapter. Every character in this novel is 4d
Hero-ish MC? or that is just his past? not a fan of 'good' mc's
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The main character should be the blond boy. That's how I remember it, Alex, right?
The book is beautiful and flowing. I haven't read much, but it looks like quality jewellery
Well, take it, easy man. Good luck.
But right now! The main character must be changed.I felt like commenting today. 4 stars!
The story is very interesting with interesting characters. I hope there will be more chapters in the future.
One thing I would like to suggest is to divide the longer paragraphs into shorter paragraphs. Maybe it is just me but it feels harder for me to read.
the writing is so good i almost though the author actually expierenced this!
good read unique perspectives magic,fantasy ect pretty good all and all
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