The character's flat, the plot's as straight as highway through the prairie, the romance is bland, and the world building is a bad impressionist landscape with blobs of colours smeared to leave a distinctly vague idea of the subject of the painting.
Read this before on wuxia world, and follow the author herself, shes a great writer and this is one of her better works that I loved to the end. Not sure if this is the same translation as the other sites, but its a worthy read nonetheless.
Very interesting story that took me to worlds, places and situations I could never have imagined. Dave has to deal with Goddesses (Destiny and Transmigration), with "Random World Transmigration Act" (which I won't begin to explain), a fairy, and most importantly, Lavendar. One of my favorite lines is, "This place defies the law of... well I think it defies all of them." That is what this tale does, it defies the usual and predictable, which is one of its best features.
Hooe this gets picked really like the story they are telling. Also its Just like the synopsis !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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the story is good with the plot expanding slowly and becoming more of game like settings at time but with some inconsistencies that do need to be fixed asap but over all is a decent story to read if you want a new book to read
Hey Author first I must say........
You did a f-ing good job on this story its completly different from the others and I hope you write more in the future, I would love that. But since I respect all writers (even if they are sometimes idiots
One off best i have readed. And it realy hard to find origan storys. I am happy that it shown up in my reconmanded section
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