It's a pretty good story, but the MC just becomes annoying after awhile. He like all other MC's have no idea what consequences are and don't prepare for them.
WHO KEEPS VOTING FOR THESE TYPE OF NOVELS?!
Honestly this is getting ridiculous. This whole novel is a mess. The origin of the story is already confusing and unclear. The MC is bland as usual. He suddenly used to be one of the top gamers yet the story contradicts itself and mentions he was librarian hence why he knows so much information. I am done. Please give us a passable novel at least. My expectations has decayed. I only want to read clear somewhat interesting novel. Is that hard to achieve?
Too messy, after 50 chapters or so, the names, cultivation level, lifespan, etc is so random.
I mean story is god.
it's interesting to read how he plays those tricks
I love this book. It's so interesting which makes me continue to read. I'm done with the chapters. Still need more author.
Aurther san.. great novel.. but need more chapters... Please........................................................................................................................................
Ironically that I am giving my own book a review but I have something important for all to know...
I am currently 12 years old. It's 2018. I am in school so I usually only release 2 chapters in each holiday but sometimes I write in math class... As a 12 year old I this is my first time writing a proper book. Each chapter I write should have slightly more words than the last. I accept all comments but no spam. Thank you for reading my book.
I think its the same as "Please Stop Talking"
I enjoyed reading it, author. Hope you won't drop this story. It's well-written and engaging, so just wait for some time and I'm sure people will discover this gem. :-)
Keep the good work btw!
It's very bad, translation is quite bad. I've seen sentences likes "the world has been established for 10 years" and things like this that don't make sense.
Not to mention that when the narrator talk about the family members, they use the family name so it end up with sentences like this:
"Fang told Fang that Fang should eat too much ... "
It is incredibly annoying to understand what is going on.
Not recommended if you want to keep at least some of your brain cells alive.
This story really has a uniqueness compared to any other stories out there.i strongly recommend it everyone.the character development is quite good and the most I like is the introduction to the story.the backstory that is added is quite intruging.anyone who likes the fantasy general definitely gonna like it.