Hi author
The novel you write is extremely nice. The chaps are also well written. I hope he makes more of them and continues his author job.
May the stars align for him.
I haven't read any chapters yet but the synopsis makes this look very interesting. I'll leave this at a 4 star review and change it when I read enough. For now hopefully this isn't dropped because it looks like it'll be great. Thx keep it up
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Yet another post-apocalyptic novel with a system (which apparently is a djinn in a lamp) - I am very positive about the novel, the MC is developing nicely, I like the Russian angle, the plot contains interesting twists for future development & the harem is kept at a minimum (regarding plot) - one important drawback though is the low release rate, I'd rather stop reading now and binge later.
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MC is a God's son. His Guardian knows this, yet she's stomping all over him, and he lets her! Yeah, he's only just born, but my goodness! after I was done with my 15 mins for a free FP I quit! Horrible!
in the end he became a racist, it's so disappointing. I stopped reading this novel when he praised China as the best country like a mad fanatic. I think I want to retract the 5-star review I gave.
I read 80 chapters and I can say this novel has a lot room for improvement. For beginning... Let's start with MC, he spent 400 years in hell... I guess it killed most of his brain cells. Zero research about 'hunter' actions before becoming one. If not plot armor, his stupidity would kill his family.
Writing quality needs some editing. Some typpos here and there. Some sentences are quiete broken.
WQ - 3 stars. You should consider editing your story before putting it before pay wall. None likes paying for being proof reader...
SU - 4 stars.
Story dev. - 3 stars. It's okay... Ruthless protagonist trying to improve his family situation and acts like wuxia protagonist killing random guy son. Blah blah blah. It could be avoided with some brains.
Character design - 2 stars. It's probably weakest side of this story. Most of characters are cliché or bland.
World background - 4 stars. Currently it feels like default Korean novel.
This rating might improve if you make things better later in story. This review is based on free chapters. Maybe, you started to put more effort after getting contracted.
I will visit later... No money for spirit stones and run out of passes. I hope this story improves.
Good luck.
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Hand speed upgrade Nice
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A subpar novel that introduces nothing new to the genre. Main character spends more time trading insults with other people than forging. For whatever reason enemies pop out left and right regardless of age.
2.5/5 stars.
I can see that this is happening like a original cultivate novel where some thing bad or trade happens and they get something good like a system or a artifact that can change there life. First of all why can't the parents not died it almost happens on every single novel so the Main character can be independent.