At first, I thought this novel would be another boring redo novel, but the more I read it, the better it seemed to me. I suggest you don't judge a book by its cover on this one. I'm sure you won't regret it. Trying to read it won't kill you anyway
Am I the only one who thought the cover arts hand was a dragon head???
pls go back to upteateing................
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The world background is frustrating and confusing. Readers will spend a lot of time wondering where the setting is (it’s not explained until pretty far into the story).
The most frustrating thing about the story is the knock-offs of existing work. He releases The Halfling (The Hobbit) with Filbo Fabbins (Bilbo Baggins) as the main character.
Every non-original song has the song title and lyrics altered in a way that’s disorienting and confusing. I guarantee you most of the readers googled the lyrics to see which song it is. It takes you out of the immersive experience. If you’re going to rip something off, you might as well be honest about it. I don’t know if the author is trying to avoid copyright strikes or whatever, but you can safely reference existing works as long as you properly cite it. Even using lyrics would be fine, it’s considered fair use.
The language is stilted. You can tell the author speaks English as a second language. This is far from the worst story on Webnovel though. But…It often comes off as word salad. Especially the chapter titles (it looks like Mad Libs sometimes).
The names of the MC and the supporting characters are awful - they’re not memorable in a literary sense.
The other thing that bothers me is that this is a novel that requires payment. Given all of the problems with the story, I don’t think this rises to the level of a work requiring payment. I’m not trying to discourage the author. In fact, if he fixes what I suggested, I’d revise the rating to 4.5/5 stars. It’s an interesting premise and can be engaging.
It is a good read if you are into the cultivator type of novels, i personally recommend this to those who are looking for a entertaining novel.
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i found it on scribble, but here have more chapter than there is there any different? and in there it have a good rating so i give you same too and change it accordingly after i read few chapter
Not too good.
I dont like mc, he is not smart and his decisions sometimes make me cringe.
Comedy aspect is lacking.
I didnt connect to the characeters
That's a great work, keep it coming and please don't drop this novel because you will be dissapointing some of us.
Love the way the MC is really perverted in all ways.
My personal opinion about your novel is that I really like it because the novel tells about the characters of gods, wizards, dragons, vampires, wolves, what's more, I like the Greek god the most, and this novel has a mystery and a plot that is not clichéd and boring, the point is this my favorite novel
I love your novels, hope you keep releasing chapters and don't stop them, and good luck to you writers.
greetings from me Indonesia :)