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amazing , that's all I can say. it has more then 5 characters that aren't brainless which alone is insane for a cultivation story. already love it even though I'm not done with it.
it blatant copy paste from "the legendary mechanic" same prologue, same power system, same code name "zero", same class,
seriously, why would webnovel placing this copycat novel here?
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Just off of reading that one last line in the description, the novel seems off putting and judging from the other reviews, MC seems like a r***ist.
QILIN REALM-- THE WORD BUILD IS AMAZING. gotta say the writers worked really hard, the descriptions and the cover, the synopsis and the plot, the pace, its all commendable! i'd love seeing more content, tried my best to not spoil this stuff but id love to complete this book as soon as my tests are done with!
So yes, of course, I am going to give my book a 5 stars. That is like a rule.
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Okay, so let me be clear.
This book is not an sm*t book like my other book, it has a more serious plot.
So of course, since I want character development as well, my mc will not be a perfect one.
Remember, we have read tons of novels, he has not.
So don't expect him to be very smart.
However, he will have people supporting him from behind who will ensure that he doesn't make bad decisions, but you will have to wait for them to appear.
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Warning: this is a revenge novel, so there will be lots of killing. Mc will even kill innocents without a shred of mercy.
There will be gore.
So read if you are comfortable with that stuff.
Thank you~~
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Now with that done, I welcome you for the ride~~
Cultivation novel with a panda MC. I will not say much, just than I like it and the fact that not a 'I will kill everyone and be OP after 20 chapter.
I would say it was a well-made piece of cake. The events were well written. The author has a pretty sharp tongue to describe the very keen details. The way artificial intelligence was described as a woman was intelligible. Apart from that this author really has a bank for vocabulary and carries a dictionary with him. I mean the words were pretty organized. Find a little time for this book. It was worth enough to be in your collection.
oh man. .. .its quite good. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
.. .. .. .. .. .. ... it has potential to develop even further. ... day updates might ruin it though. .. .
isn't this the Scoring the sacred body of the ancient from the get-go.........
Right first things first: so far there are only 8 chapters out not counting the prologue, but from what I have seen so far, I am pretty impressed. The main character has plenty, and I mean PLENTY of room for character development and growth. The world seems intruiging, and from what (very little) I have seen of the magic system it seems… at least to have some thought put into it. There is no system, which is nice, but it also means the magic system is much harder to pull off. The plot so far seems interesting, but it could dramatically crash and burn as working in the mechanics of a softer power system, like there seems to be, can leave all kinds of plot holes. I am really excited for this book and hope it will be at least as good as the author’s other one, which I have been enjoying so far.
Oh and Mr Author; if you do put 18+ content in there please make sure it is in a self contained chapter that doesnt affect the story? Thanks
The story has a promising plot and a very relatable main character. ? The description of the background and the characters is first-class. ? The flow of the novel is amazing and the length of the chapters and paragraphs are enjoyable to read. The emotions and actions, you feel them and can experience them as you read. ?? The story itself is plot-driven, with a really interesting and unique setting. ?? I can not wait to see what else the author and Jace come up with! I hope the author will continue writing the story!
