TheUngod
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I've just started reading your novel (c18) and I think it has an amazing potential!I like how the beginning was unexpected, and the fact that the author doesn't give that much information about the story only just enough you don't get lost. He also adds these little teasers about the background of the main character that makes you think "wonder how that happened
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DON'T READ Starting from second reincarnation it starts to become West vs China I am not defending Brits but this way of trying to rewrite history through fantasy is very cringe your country was backward, corrupt and defeated nothing is going to change it. Those missionaries you try to portray as child trafficer in this novel tried to help you during the great famine when your own goverment abondened its people causing chinese population to turn cannibal.
An excellent read if you like history and a realistic approach to changing history. It is a novel idea but a bit of a thick read at times. I suggest at least reading to chapter ten.
I have read all the books that have been translated so far. Very great books
Of them all Tang wulin is the most independent, not relying on outside knowledge
10/10
I really wanted to like this novel... Novels about blacksmithing are my favorite.
But i couldn't, i had to stop at chapter 17...
The crafting chapters are perfect, it shows that the author cared and researched a lot about it.
But the character interactions are so stupid and irrational that makes my head hurt.
I really try to ignore all of that but omg i can't.
Some situations are so stupid and forced that feel this story is written by a kid.
I meant no disrespect, but this had to be said..
Although it seems very good, the bad grammar makes it unreadable, so one star from me. Its so bad that i cannot understand many of the words used, and it has switched around names of stuff already.
Interesting plotline. The sypnosis and title page are very intriguing. Character design is unique as well. Though there's a few misplaced punctuations and spaces here and there, they're nothing major. The world the author built was so compelling that the reader kept wanting more. A nice work, overall. Keep it up!
Reading raws, atm at 1.2k chapter. MC weak and 99% times saved by luck or someone. If you want to read wizard novel sorry, this novel just like your average novel where mc always run.
100-200 chapter - best ones. Almost just like wizard style novel.
201+ get worse but readable.
Novel have 2k+ chapters atm and nothing much changed. Even short story parts that can end up in 5-10 chapters get increased by x10 times.
Way too much water.
Chaotic sword wars in one day of the sinful spirit spirit your life god of demon of evil evil father and king of evil father god and father king
