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this just is a copy of shield hero, it even copies all the essentials of the anime, hero has useless class and can't defeat anyone so he gets a slave that likes him and helps him kill things to level up, but people hate him because he offended the king's daughter, ( or in this case the king ). and then at the last part that I saw of shield hero, he awakens a demonic power that uses his rage
Let's see, a story with greek mythology, check!
Good characters, check!
Good premise and world also check!
Good job, Author you got something good here, the only problem would be a few grammar mistakes here and there (but like I always say it does not ruin or hinder a good story and can be fixed with ease and time) so keep going Author!
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
so far so good. I like the side character part, It adds a challenge to the story that is refreshing. another point is the system and his interactions that are funny most of the time.keep it up, my dude
I am the author and after writing for more than 400 chaps, I would like to inform that if you are here for a mc who is super smart, smart with relationship, and is practical then this story is not for you; along with slow paced. The MC is dense and slowly develops character, and even if he has lived for 5000 years, he still is a simple guy, who has less EQ. The story is very slow paced, but if you are willing to read it I can tell you that you will definitely feel some change within.
The main conceit of the novel is that the MC, a reincarnated or transmigrated man, offers analysis and advice to the disguised king of the country without knowing the king’s identity. In the 30 chapters so far, he’s also impressed three of the king’s ministers with his wisdom and ability to reach accurate conclusions given the scarcest of indirect evidence.It is unclear whether he actually has such Holmesian deductive skills, or if he constructs post hoc cover stories for the knowledge he already has of the kingdom’s development. It’s not clear why he has this knowledge of the kingdom’s development either, or how comprehensive in scope and timeline his knowledge is.Then there’s the fact that according to the synopsis he has a system, which we have yet to see. In summary, at this point the novel has been a pleasure to read, but if it continues in the same vein of him giving sagacious analyses to the king and his ministers, it will get stale. However, as indicated above, there’s still a lot of room for further developments and significant changes to the plot, so it is almost certainly the case that the trial chapters cannot be used to judge the rest of the novel.
Hello Author, I noticed thatbypu like to use quaint and rarely use words which do indeed give the novel a unique and flashy feel but I would advice you to not use them any further unless you can suddenly increase your writing skills by a large margin because using flashy words when your writing skills are not quite there yet will make it harder for you to keep up the 89 same pace and quality of the story. It will make it harder for you to explain certain scenarios without constantly referencing which will give important scenes a rigid feel.sincerely, a fellow aspiring writer.
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Amazing just amazing. I love this story. I just love the way the characters are made and even the way the white jacks are designed. The sci-fi setting is believable and the story pacing is one of the things I love about the story. There are some grammatical errors but they can be solved.
Can not tell if it was dropped or if the author has other real life issues preventing the novel from continuing for now. But the book is really good and has great character and world development so far.
I was honestly surprised with how much I enjoyed the first 20 chapters. While not perfect, the world is realistic enough and the story is logical and fun.
The mc's cheat is both very op and not very op at the same time which is a very good sweet spot I think.