Not really review but cover of this novel is erm ... you can compare with pursuing immortality . Well just for exp......................................................
really great, it's like a remaster of a ton of Chinese novels but actually made interesting.
The MC also has an actual personality.
ALSO THE AUTHOR HAS A CR1TIKAL PROFILE PIC SO KMMA GIVE IT A 5/5
My time has come...
*Clears throat*
1. 2. 3. Music!
I wanna be the very best
Like no one ever was
To catch them is my real test
To train them is my cause
I will travel across the land
Searching far and wide
Each Monster Pet to understand
The power that's inside!
Monster Pets!
Gotta catch 'em all!
You'll fight for me
It will be your destiny
Monster Pets!
Oh, you're my good pet
In a world I must dictate!
Monster Pets!
Gotta catch 'em all!
A heart so true
Your courage will pull us through!
You beat them and I beat you
Monster Pets!
Gotta catch 'em all!
Gotta catch 'em all!
Oh yeah...
Every challenge along the way
With courage you will face
You will battle every day
To claim my rightful place!
Come with me, the time is right
There's no better team
On and on we'll win the fight
It's always been my dream
Monster Pets!
Gotta catch 'em all!
You'll fight for me
It will be your destiny
Monster Pets!
Oh, you're my good pet
In a world I must dictate!
Monster Pets!
Gotta catch 'em all!
A heart so true
Your courage will pull us through!
You beat them and I beat you
Monster Pets!
Gotta Catch 'em all!
Gotta Catch 'em all!
Gotta Catch 'em all!
Gotta Catch 'em all!
Gotta Catch 'em all!
Yeah!
Monster Pets!
Gotta catch 'em all!
You'll fight for me
It will be your destiny
Monster Pets!
Oh, you're my best pet
In a world I must dictate!
Monster Pets!
Gotta catch 'em all!
A heart so true
Your courage will pull us through!
You beat them and I beat you
Monster Pets!
Gotta catch 'em all!
Gotta catch 'em all!
Monster Pets!
I didn't even read a single chapter yet..But I keep giving this novel my Energy Stones
My main problem with this novel is how the Author fills up the chapter with multiple of same system announcements instead of just putting something like x10. They will literally repeat it 2-4 times in the chapter thus wasting my coins or passes
To be honest I expected this story to be terrible or for the grammar and plot to be all over the place. And for that I do apologize I did not expect for it to be a hidden gem. As of chapter 9 where you have written up to for us readers to enjoy the story is flowing very smoothly and while there are a lot of cliches, they are put in such a way that even though we know them they are actually enjoyable to read. I'm definitely looking forward to more from you if you are serious about this story and don't drop it or start to rush your chapters and give us half baked nonsense. Then this is looking to be a new favorite of mine. I saw you had no reviews and since I've never reviewed a story I thought hey why not do a first for the both of us. You have a great story here and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Have fun and for anyone reading this I hope you enjoy it as much as I have.
This books has My heart ❤️
Solid pick based on 102 chapters. The author improved after his last novel. While this one's pace is also slow and down to the ground, the MC there seems to have a better personality, earns things by himself instead of being indebted/burdened by clan, he gets his action time and comes out with a satisfying result, the side characters such as the girl are more interesting too and could indeed make up for interesting relations and situations years later.
Author's interesting note after chapter 102:
,,As I said in the previous chapter, I abandoned a lot of constraints to write this book, and wrote it completely according to my own ideas, and I will no longer be influenced by anyone's opinions!
If you don’t like to read it, you think it’s poisonous here, and there’s something unreasonable, please do it yourself. The starting point is such a large library, you can always find something that suits your heart. Or you can try to write a book you want, saying Maybe it will be a hit, and it will be a mortal one!
I am actually very disgusted that some people say that my plot is unreasonable here, and there are many loopholes, because I am actually very concerned about the rationality of the plot and the self-consistency of logic. People who say this will make me more angry than directly scolding me for throwing on the street. Makes me feel like an insult to my writing!
In the previous episodes of Lin Xiaoe, one by one shouted poison, and shouted that the little white dog gave up the book, and I laughed. I have read books for so many years, I don't know that there are many books with this kind of plot?
But how many books did I deal with later?
And I think this plot is handled very well, because she is used as a point to give the protagonist the first magic weapon, some life-saving charms, medicinal pills, including the following charts, which opens up a new situation, and more later Do a good job of the outline of the new plot.
This kind of writing with dots and lines is exactly what I am good at and what I like.
The so-called old bottle of new wine, the development of online literature to the present, if you want to say who has written a plot, no one else has written it before, that is impossible, and the creator can only slightly modify and innovate some plots.
Just like domestic music, it is not because the predecessors have written all the lyrics and tunes that are easy to create, and now it is more and more difficult to introduce such classic songs.
Besides, why is the protagonist an aboriginal?
In the first two books, I chose a transmigrator protagonist, and then I found that although a transmigrator is easy to arouse readers' approval at first, the disadvantages will appear as the plot unfolds later.
Once the protagonist encounters someone who wants to plot against him, but the protagonist doesn't see it, many readers will jump out and say that the protagonist is stupid, why is it so easy to trust people, and it's a transmigrator, they don't know anything!
I really don't know how to explain it!
Are there many examples of being deceived in reality? How many people who think they are smart don't know when they are being lied to?
There is a good joke that you are not deceived, just because you are not worth being deceived.
When those professional liars really want to deceive you face to face, you can't prevent it!
Today's novel readers, many of them read a lot of books, they all know astronomy and geography, and know everything about ancient and modern China and foreign countries, and they are all transparent about the world. In their eyes, the protagonist of the transmigrator should be like this.
But I really want to ask a question, even if you pass through and get the golden finger, can you really understand people's hearts? Then you can see from someone else's word or action that someone wants to hurt you? Then immediately preemptively kill others?
There is no doubt that God's perspective is cool, but in the Xianxia world, especially in the mortal world view of Xianxia, God's perspective has become an obstacle that greatly affects the author's writing, at least for me.
So I chose a native who would persuade many people at the beginning, an aboriginal who grew up from an orphan, an aboriginal protagonist who would make mistakes, correct them, and learn from them."
it's pretty good so far read up to date as of December 15th 2022. I got it free read for the Christmas event. I like it so far. only issue is pay wall is at 29. not something I'd normally choose to read. but I havnt been disappointed yet by it. story is told nicely author seems to be active in his story. the Mc is well drawn out and original. the idk antagonist or second Mc (who knows at this point so no spoiler)in time was put in okay. not comment on what happens. world back ground is good. Mc seems original tho heavy influence of other works but author gives credit where credit is due and literature is ment to influence others and give ideas so no harm no foul in my opinion. Grammer seems good to at least decent. I'm no expert though but looks good to me. world back ground is taken care of nicely. story development...it's good so far honestly and I thought I should leave 3 dots there for dramatic effect lol. but that's about it. I recommend reading it if you got the coins or passes or win it like I did. that should about cover it all
The potential of the story is really good, I have been wanting to read something like this for some time already. And the way the MC is I can’t wait to see more situations in the plot
The author here with a totally biased review
I've wanted to start consistently writing a story for a while now, so I'm trying to use this as a way to motivate me to not only write more but also improve on things such as grammar and style.
I'll be trying to get this story posted at least once a week and with a goal of 1000 words for a page from now on.
So thanks to those who stick around to see me fling myself at writing and hope I hit a bullseye.