Probably the best ‘store based’ novels on the platform; excellent writing and great update stability! The characters are well made, but a little bare on backstory though there are only 20 chapters thus far so that could change.Im very excited to see where this story will go!
Story so far is pretty lit, I love Ian's motivations and his gradually rise to the top. Not to mention the attention he is gradually attracting to himself. I love his battles vs boss monsters, as it shows his growth and developement. Keep up the good work!
Alright so imo this novel is worth a 4.6 even though its got good pacing and update stability. My problems for this novel are the story development and world background. Now don't get me wrong the story develops at a nice steady pace but all the traing could be sped up. Now my problem with the world background is that not much is known, like for example the MC doesn't know what the knights Academy is called this is just lazy writing in my opinion. Author could've said something along the lines of 'my "friend" Carl was supposed to be working on its story' or 'That "bastard" Carl was always slow in his work while goofing off' this is a way to slowly hint at the otherworld whilst also giving off slight info as a reason instead of resorting to the previously sloppy story background. Don't get me wrong I don't hate this novel I just have high expectations for it so forgive me if I'm hard on you Author I just love your novel and don't want it to fail.
I like the development of the story. The characters are also very well done and i don't see any grammar errors.
Anyway, It's very interesting and a good book. I do recommend it and keep up the good work author! This will be bug someday!
like a lot plz continue ............... expecting alot hope mc reach his dream i eabt to also see how he will use his...programming skill.....
mc parents are best but hope they also get a lot screen time...
This s actually good
Mandarin Title: 武神血脉 (A Martial God's Bloodline)
Status: Complete
Total Chapters: 5030
Genre: Fantasy, Adventure, Self-Discovery
Author: 刚大木 (Gundam) but also goes by the name 哦雷哇刚大木哒 (Ore Wa Gandamu Da)
Author has 13 other works and this is the latest work, serialized on chuangshi.qq. Very respected author!
Read the machine translation of this novel using Google and the author lives up to reputation. Translator did an excellent job too! No spoilers here, but the story is better than most and the 60 chapters simply do not do it justice! You won't regret supporting this novel! Would be a shame if it does not get picked.
Story is good. But the MC quiet useless. Dumb and stupid decision. Weak for being a former s-class hunter. More like a ****ty hunter. Many forced interaction and filler. Sometimes it pain in the ass to read it. Come 12 yr with 40+ mental age still looking for a date. More like a forced romance. Its like more ****ty to reincarnation a ****ty hunter. But well if you can ignore all the fault u can still enjoy the novel. But for me, sorry it’s not my cup of tea. And sorry for being harsh.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book
First let me say this, I HATE NTR WITH MY LIFE!!!THIS STORY IS GOOOOODMC OBVIOUSLY ISNT NORMAL IN THE HEADAND ONCE AGAIN I HATE NTR WITH MY LIFE!!!!!!But still 5 stars
I read 80 chapters and I can say this novel has a lot room for improvement. For beginning... Let's start with MC, he spent 400 years in hell... I guess it killed most of his brain cells. Zero research about 'hunter' actions before becoming one. If not plot armor, his stupidity would kill his family. Writing quality needs some editing. Some typpos here and there. Some sentences are quiete broken. WQ - 3 stars. You should consider editing your story before putting it before pay wall. None likes paying for being proof reader...SU - 4 stars. Story dev. - 3 stars. It's okay... Ruthless protagonist trying to improve his family situation and acts like wuxia protagonist killing random guy son. Blah blah blah. It could be avoided with some brains.Character design - 2 stars. It's probably weakest side of this story. Most of characters are cliché or bland. World background - 4 stars. Currently it feels like default Korean novel.This rating might improve if you make things better later in story. This review is based on free chapters. Maybe, you started to put more effort after getting contracted. I will visit later... No money for spirit stones and run out of passes. I hope this story improves. Good luck.
I’m giving them all a 5 because you executed them perfectly. honestly, world background, and character design deserved more than a 5!!!I loved how descriotive it was, it flowed easily and I felt like I was standing right there. I’m also a fan of an epic plot, and I can’t wait to see how this story will end!!! Greak work!!!!!!!!