Muy ilustrativa análisis de situaciones qué hacen moldear el carácter del personaje
Has potential, more character depth is really all that I could ask for from a novel like this. The world building is acceptable for this novel, but it it isn't great. Keep up the good work man.
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Here catch my 1 stars review.
So far I am hooked in this story and I have to say author you are doing amazing so far keep it up man can’t wait for more chapter!Also if you haven’t read this novel give it a shot!
Garbage waste of time Read the first 10 chapters and can’t stay interested in the storyHave no idea what the writer is trying to convey to the reader considering most readers don’t have a through knowledge of Chinese mythology Maybe the writer had an interesting idea and plot but unfortunately with weak start no one would stay and suffer to read it
well written, nice. In short, read it. XD.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Seriously translator? Are you that lazy? Shixiong,shidi,shijie,laoda and etc? We do not need the pinyin of these things. It causes the readers to put in unnecessary effort just to read this book. It's even worse for readers who are new to pinyin. How fucking lazy can you get? Won't give you a five star rating until you update all of them from chapter 1 onwards.
writing quality . ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐story development . ⭐character design . ⭐update stability . ⭐world background . ⭐Now the review...~Since the story is about Tycoon that got found out..... that he's the richest person after the reality show . Now think about this : plot will end after the show ends, soAuthor gonna drag the reality show through infinity...... doing anything & everything... otherwise story will end.A single chapter plot is dragged through more than 20 ~ chapters as of now... & it will continue to be......It's cliché, cringe, too much hypocrisy, nonsense, not funny, no action, idiotic mc.A salute to those who will read it ???
I recommend passing on this one unless you want to read yet another racist author’s work. It doesn’t happen in the first 40 chapters, but I’ve read the MTL and it happens later in the story when the MC goes to a higher realm and is talking to one of the officials in that realm of the likelihood of being able to marry even a maid in the realm. The official tries to explain it with a hypothetical — “If you had a daughter who wanted to marry a Black man, you wouldn’t like that, right?” And MC goes, “I’d break some legs if I had a daughter that dared to marry a Black man.” Ugh.
Interesting ? this ML started off with an attitude that was somewhat irritating to me. From 20 onwards, the attitude seems to have adjusted
Plot is great, but there is so much errors. Bezos becoming Saros, numbers erorrs. Just re-edit chapters please, couse its hard to read right now couse of that. (review at 20 chapters)