The grammar seems to be a bit off here and there and that makes it difficult to get into the story. Also the main characters thought process seems weird to me, I can't imagine doing any of the things he does if I was in the same situation.
This is not a review I just have a question. Is this novel dropped. The author hasn't updated the novel in like 2 months. This novel actually had a decent story and the world building was also going good. But now it seems its another dropped novel.
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Listen Author, Please don't drop this one. I am loving it. Great one from the beginning till the continuation. Recommended to all fantasy lovers.
A legendary novel, the best of what I have read, I advise everyone to give it a chance because it will excel over all novels and I wish success to the writer and thank him for his efforts in translation and editing
The way this story is developing is really good and I like how the MC evolves. I also like the way you wrote the book. This is a good read, keep up the good work.?