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it's excellent...... I love the setting of the story and i also liked that you didn't make the mc op in a single chapter and the romance is also quite good so that it won't hinder the pace of action later
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I won't be exaggerating when I say this book has so much potential. You are such a good writer, and you write professionally too. Also, I like the thoughts of the MC. Goodluck with this one! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Undoubtedly the best romance novel here, I highly recommend this book to readers who want a mystery, suspense, and romantic genre all in one. The character development is just spot on, great work!!
i never thought of writing a review here nor did give one beforebut this novel deserves one.first of all the novel is amazing it refreshing to read. it's not like other novel where the MC would get skills and be super strong, here it's a bit different it's neither a OP one nor a sloppy one, it's the best for that situation. And the other thing i liked in this novel was romance even tho it's not much but i like those sweet moments. Even tho there are few bugs coming in between their relationship both MC and FMC are swatting those bugs away and i do hope that author won't make any changes to their relationship especially cheating, NTR, etc it would be worst.i think that's it. Thanks for the novel and hope u keep up the good work??
At chapter 170, the quality of translation takes a nosedive. Worse than machine translation. The entire chapter is a single paragraph, names change constantly within the chapter. Unreadable garbage.
25 chapter review.Honestly, much better than I expected. The mc transmigrated or reincarnated as a summoned beast and a random little girl named Vivian is his summoner.I like to say that he transmigrated in a virtual game similar to The Legendary Mechanic. The mc himself is a BOSS-rated monster so he is quite strong with high potential.The mc doesn't have a status panel but his summoner aka random NPC villager girl, Vivian does. As a NPC she can't see her status panel but MC can and he also can operate it. So, basically he can control the development of his summoner and himself through Vivian's panel.Translation Quality: 5* (It isn't MTL but you might see some weird words that looks like mistranslation but probably isn't. The translator didn't give context so it's lost translation instead. Meaning lost in translation)SoU: 5* (It's trial read)Story Development: 5* (Honestly, read it yourself, it has 25 chapters as I am writing this review)Character Design: 4* (Only Vivian has some unique personality, the rest of the characters are quite basic designs)World Background: 5* (Basically The Legendary Mechanic. But for those who don't know. It's basically a 100% realistic virtual world where the mc is transmigrated as a summoned beast of a NPC, due that he is a NPC he doesn't have a level limit and can become very strong. Because it's a game there will be major events leading to many changes in the world where the mc will take advantage of due his future knowledge of the game)Overall score: 4.8Personal score: 4.5
Here as a friend to the author. I may be biased coz I want to help him out, but I am trying my best to be critical. Coffee calls it "literary metafiction" all the time but I call it "magic mystery" for its attempt to bind fantasy with mystery together, specifically detective fiction.Each and every chapter, the plot thickens and more mysteries are waiting to be uncovered. Good book! I recommend it for mystery lovers who want a tinge of fantasy. Or the other way around, lol---Writing Quality: 4 - Unique linguistic skills. You know the author has passed his grammar and has studied how to write fiction. Exceptionally good at transitions! A bit nerdy though for the tattered references. From Marvel to nonfiction about chaos theory to anime I can't tell them all!!!!!!!!!! - Coffee likes X-Men and Doctor Strange.Stability of Updates: 5 - Has plans to update daily and then some, I can assure that.Story Development: 3 - Downsides! I understand its literary fiction, as he says the pacing is more dragged than normal. But I'll be frank and say it has an unhealthy development after Memento Memori (catchy chapter name, I like it!) The direction its taking doesn't feel like it will go back to the problems of Mikoto Arakawa, the person who is introduced as the main heroine. I'll be waiting thoughCharacter Design: 4 - Characters are built throughout the novel. Some characters aren't given love though, like introducing one at the start of the chapter only to not appear in the following chapters. The Light Mage rival who's named "Kuroko" (black child), for example, where? - Has a memorable sense with names. Shirayuki, the protagonist, means Snow White. The twins Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi are based from the Japanese gods of sun and moon. The Seven Gods might be hard to figure out but when mentioned they are the shichifukujin (seven fortune gods). World Background: 4 - Magic school in modern Japan. Mages are a different race of people separated from Humans. Mages and Humans are enemies. Simple. It only becomes complex when you consider individuality but I think that's normal.
This is so garbage, everyone who insults him he would put a smile on his face and just take it even when he's now super rich. Apparently he even trained in the battlefield yet he still keeps getting stepped on. This is just straight up awful, apparently he even gets back with the one who cheated on him? This chicken scrap of a 'novel' makes no sense. Don't bother reading.
The story has a good plot and decent development. Though there are a few time skips it doesn’t give you everything at once which overloads the reader. The writing style is also pretty good. The author is kind enough to take suggestions from the readers which is an added bonus. The only issue would be the occasional grammar mistakes. Considering how often they update ad that they do it on their own plus the length of the chapters I’m surprised it’s minor things like plurals ever now and then which shows the author is good at writing.