Im about 20 chapters in. But my god, why does he love this girl so much? He doesnt know anything about her, she hasnt done anything for him, barely interacts with him, yet he has professed his love 500+ times? Solely because of her looks? WHY? Its just confusing and out of place. Other than that frustrating bit it hasnt been bad so far.
I'm really excited to see where this goes. The writer is doing amazing things with this novel. I'm so happy for another good hxh story. Dabi's powers work really well here. I'm glad the mc is not uber op like other stories but still reasonably very strong.
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Anybody that read this comment i have 2 say this novel is pretty good so give it a read
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I don't know where to start with this one, so far I've read most of the novels from this batch and all of them have been garbage. Real shame too because the last 2 weeks have been alright.
This novel is boring, unoriginal, uninspired, pointless, soulless, poorly executed and all round bad. This has no redeeming qualities. There is nothing even remotely good about this. I don't mind generic novels, I actually quite like them.
This on the other hand isn't generic. It's shameless formulaic garbage. It's almost certainly an attempt at a cashgrab by the author. He just took whatever is currently popular and passionlessly threw it together and made this disgrace of a novel. 0.5/5
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That is interesting and embarrassing at the same time he is going to have powerful monsters protecting him but if he gets into a fight by himself he will be beaten by a two year old
I did not even beginn reading and all the Rewiews are about what a trash rasict that thing calling itself Author is.........................
Looking forward to this one!
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mc has social anxiety and stutters everytime he talks out loud despite being with a different woman every night in his previous life, everybody ever in the chapters I've read thinks everything weird about him is from his childhood parental abuse, like their thoughts are so unbelievable that it is harder to read than the stutters, the structure of a lot of sentences are not done properly
Its another OP Mary Sue character. too much plot armor, gets strong immediately, and I predict no character growth.
I understand he is supposed to be an OP character, but the story isnt structured to compensate for it. With no adversities, what do we have? A novel meant to be a power fantasy of the author.
Couldn’t get past the point where he got his system. I feel like I am reading a summary of a bastardized amilgimation of system novels and clichés wherein every character has the personality of a wet blanket and the worldbuilding is unironically worse than a childrens storybook.
just a free advice if you like take it or just leave it . please don't these reader's advice affect your story . don't include unnecessary things like romance and all those stuff . especially harem these things are like fire if don't written well it will destroy your entire story but If you have confidence and a well directed plot then to i advice to be cautious. please don't these reader's affect the way you think they are here to read your story not to direct your story and most important do listen effective things and critic but not trash . and in the last thankyou for your efforts