the dynamic between him and the demoness / anyone else stronger then him is extremely repetetive and anoying. mc is always under someones control bending the knee, acting like a servant. author is refraining from mentioning the cultivation level of these people, presumably so that he can keep this going forever. the sequence of events feels forced. Everyone is looking for trouble with mc for no real reason (it is unclear to me why he is the center of attention at all), and to top it of he is horrible at using his cheat...
MC is an idiot. Last 18 years of his life are not told to us and all thats told is system said suffer 18 years no system and you will be OP He gets system and goes from mortal up 10 levels. Then he decides to spend all the spirit stones system gave him and goes up 2 more levels. He complains about lack of levels when few seconds ago he was saying how people would be jealous since it takes them years to go up a level/s or so. MC didnt even try to save some spirit stones so he's broke.Then he doesnt know how strong he is but decides to go and hunt beasts. I mean he was a mortal and since it was never told what he did so I am assuming he doesnt know their strength etc but is like yep I got cultivation now let me go fight beasts ? Since he was never a cultivator we were never told about his last 18 years of life. Also just because you have cultivation doesnt mean you know how to fight. Also the beasts were higher level so it seems pretty stupid.He keeps saying well I read novels in my last life so I know how this works....Knowledge he should not possess is somehow just filled in by somehow saying he knows itMC receives a physique which makes him the best looking man in the world. Yes this is the most idiotic thing because he decides to go work in the red light district. The moment he walks there every single girl is like do me...I mean everyone. Girls who have boyfriends, fiance etc...they all want to pay him....So let me get this straight you just started cultivating and instead of being smart/hiding your identity, you decide to go flaunt it knowing you could be captured? I mean atleast enter brothel masked and talk to people there to work there before showing your face.I mean why doesnt he think they could place slave seal on him? force him to work You are at the weakest cultivation realm and you are going around like an idiot...Yeah I cant handle the amount of stupidity
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This is a well-written novel. I cannot wait for the next chapter. The author has outdone him/herself. The amount of detail this novel focuses on is just amazing. I did have my doubts but as the story progressed, all dissipated and I started to truly read the novel. I am loving this.
I love the way theo thinks...and yeah the character stella is so pure and care free it was obvious that he will falk in love with her ..when i read this book for second time when theo didn't have feelings for her and was sleeping with regina i was kind of hurt but u knw as the stry continued it gave +ve vibes and i was satisfied reading it
The story is so cool and very descriptive. Everything about the novel is
Best modern fantasy story i have ever read.
the way author portrays and blends both modern and fantasy world is way good than any other novels out there.
author keep up with the good work and i whole heartedly support your work and hope to see your book continue to provide good quality story development in future. and release some more chapters .[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I have been putting off writing a review for this novel because I was hoping it would get better....
Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐
Story Development⭐
Character Design⭐⭐
World Background ⭐⭐
'(this is 2.6 ⭐so i tried to get it up to 3⭐ but i could not do it)' (sorry author but i tried)
First of all the biggest problem in this novel is the MC.
He is so so so so so frustrating to read about.
He should be a proud royal dragon right?
WRONG!
What we get is and MC who keeps on hiding his power.
(Ruler in the shadows my ass he doesn't even kill someone for 100+ chapters)
So if you are her for a fun fantasy trip (turn around).
MC is also super slow in cultivation like for real he is still at the first layer of the first cultivation realm! 100 chapters and he is at layer 1.
I'm not kidding it takes him 100 chapters to start cultivation.
He fights a few mortals that's about it...
Also everyone and there nan is trying to kill MC.
Yet all he does is hide and hide and hide and die (that's right he fakes his own dead to hide from mortals even tho he is a cultivator)
A cultivator who can't kill a single mortal and keeps hiding from them.
IT TAKES HIM 100 CHAPTERS TO TAKE CARE OF A MORTAL WHORE!!!!
^ that's right you did not read this wrong. IT takes MC 100+ chapters to take care of a random WHORE!
A MORTAL WHORE WITH NO BACKING/ NOT FROM A BIG CLAN/ NOT SMART/SHE HAS NOTING SPECIAL ABOUT HER/ A NORMAL FUCKING SKANK
And it takes MC 100+ chapters to do noting that's right he is still hiding form her.
This is also a first for me in all the novels I have read I have never seen a CULTIVATOR that's hiding from a everyday MORTAL.
In the last couple of chapters it seems like author is trying to turn MC around but I would not get my hopes up.
The whore was alone no1 around, no protection, no reason to not kill her. And MC left.....
She also
Killed his dad,
Tried poisoning him,
Drugged his lovers,
Tried selling his MAIN WIFE to a PERV,
Tried selling his second wife to a perv,
Tried selling his third wife to a perv,
Tried selling his slave to a perv,
Tried sending/drugging his MAIN WIFE to a PERV,
Tried sending/drugging his second wife to a perv,
Tried killing him on more the one occasion,
Tried selling his lovers to another guy,
Tried ....
And MC lets this random WHORE run around for 100 of chapters......
When all it would have taken was to just kill her and be over with it.
This novel is so frustrating i don't even know if i can recommend it to anyone who is looking for a fun novel to read.
I'm also not sure I will continue reading this when I'll need to pay but ill probably keep reading it but think long and hard b4 you guys start reading this FRUSTRATING NOVEL!
Ooo yea i almost forgot MC is also and emotional wreck for the first 90+ chapters.
So all in all its meh.
Let's see, I hadn't started yet, I will write here what I expect of this novel
nothing, so I can't be disapointed.
I HATE MINIMUM WORD TO BE ABLE TO PUBLISH THE COMMENT
Path to victory is invading other fictions.
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Muy buena historia, buena pausa y con capítulos versátiles... Una de las pocas historias que vale la pena leer cuando te aburre lo fantástico pero te sigue gustando un MC OP.
Our MC transmigrated and becomes a toy maker/tv show producer. As usual our Mc has knowledge that the world doesn't have, but works hard to do so. The plot is decent paced, and is realistic. If you want fast developed pacing this is not it, but if you want world building than this is for you.