Interesting synopsis, i think this's good novel if there's no harem
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I like your stories it really is good and deserve to be animated, also I hope that it is not close to being finish and that they are many more chapters to come on the future, lastly I like how you develop the characters especially tang wulin with his mood, characteristic and how he gain and develop his power.
The author's style is unique, and he is still laying the groundwork in any way he can. I enjoy stories that last a long time, and this is one of them. I can't wait for more now that the tale is starting to make sense. The trope is good, but the execution is lacking. Yet it is still good. The story progressed slowly. For character design, there are some confusing points in which the author promises that things happen for a reason so that the MC might have more reasons why he had that kind of personality. The world background is provided briefly, and the writing quality is decent.
If you are a serious reader better stay out of this novel, if you like MC with thousand way of insult then there you have it. The minus is the stability of the updates, everything else is o.k. Sorry for bad star ratting, the unstable of the updates makes me lost.
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good story so far but has a lot of typos. especially with power levels and names........................... . ............................. .
Okay okay I've only read to chapter 9 but I can tell this is better than both of the VR novels currently in the top 40. The grammar is impeccable. The MC isn't dull, I haven't gotten to the side characters yet but I have complete faith in the author. Please don't drip this novel Mr. Author I'll do the best I can to get this noticed. I'm in it for the long haul.
This is a cringe worthy novel the author has out done himself.
Why most of the VR novels are so bad? It's like I dont't even know....
To be tota honestly this is going on my top 10 list
I went into this novel unsure of what to expect, I thought it would probably be some kind of gag series. I was then pleasantly surprised by the enjoyable way in which the story is presented, and the depth that each character is given in their personality. I recommend adding this to your list, even if it doesn't sound like something that interesting. Keep it near for a rainy day where your other novels are all up to date and you have nothing to do, it's worth remembering.
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