I really like this novel, I just wish the author had more chapters. The short teaser was really a good opener, but without the follow up I feel let down.
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To the Author,1. Writing quality is to the level of undrestand but not to the good/best quality,2. Updates- atleast 1 or 2 chapters per week,3. Story development is good but make it little bit instense training for MC.4. Make MC and Anti-Hero who does Justice and kill the wrong-doers, Make his outfit/Suit full black without Mask or With Mask with lots of defensive fuinjustsu on it's suit,Make MC the Master of all things - Survival Technique, Sealing, Fuinjustsu , Martial Arts( Combat , Sword, Staff and all other weapons, Chi, Ki, Chakra, Nature Energy and Yin/Yang Energy, etc.,), all Ninjutsu(also creates his unique jutsus which can be leard by any one but is very hard including his Sage Mode)All Sage Modes- Combining it into one unique Sage Mode to Make it permanent to his body only with Tattos no other like becoming otsusuki but Making him to grow with unlimited potential.Make the MC have his GF/Wife to have both Biyakugan and Sharingan together.( and No Harem please)4. World Background - Make it Light hearted as Well as Dark sides too. Make The MC have his own group in ANBU/Normal Ninja as It named Rudra( who finish the evil by eradicating it completely to it's roots) with out mask and sometimes mask(for special missions- Simple black human mask with numbers) but ALL BLACK with lots of invisible fuinjustsu on it cloth making it very defensive.Thanks!Yours truly-Reader-Kun.
the mc is a rapist somewhere around Chapter 10 he rapes a girl he's staying with..........................................................
read over 150 chapters in MTL.. the story is kinda meh.. martial arts here tends to be kinda like "martial arts master" with no qi n all but with fighting concept n all that.. but it's very terrible in comparison.. it was pretty solid n clearly mentioned over there but here it's just put out badly.. n the way it's progressing it seems like author has messed up the power systems n wants to bring back the normal cultivation systems.. story is kinda fine but as a cultivation/martial arts specific novel I'd expect it's power system to be good or atleast clear n not keep changing since it wasn't planned properly
the system gets stronger, and he gets more abilities. The more he possesses people, so in 19 chapters, he possesd 1 person..... not even worth being bathroom reading material
Had high hopes on the novel. The synopsis was encouraging as well as initial chapters . But then things quickly went downhill. (dropped it on about chapter 30). - Unnecessary extras. What do I care about the name of each of the 9 fingers of the villainous organization and what they look like. What does it matter to me that one of them attacked the office of local heroes and got off with heavy losses. And moreover, I don't care about a detailed description of his fight with the hero Porcupine. - The weak emotional part of the work. In theory, given the circumstances of the hero and his ability, this should have become a pillar of the work. But no, this point is almost completely ignored. (The fact that this work is generally from a third person only makes the situation worse)- Battles... what a masterpiece(no)... the hero is beaten - he flies away from inpact (unscathered). Beats the enemy in turn. If the enemy is weak, this is the end. If strong - enemy enters a new stage of his strength and the cycle repeats ... (and yes, according to the precepts of grandfather Madara, no one starts the fight in full force). - Spoiler. I read the last chapters - the hero says that they defeated the gods and he himself became a god... it strengthened my resolve to grop the novel...- And yes, romance. I usually have both hands for it in any work... but here it seems more pulled out of the finger than anywhere else
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I really loved reading this story! The characters and world building are some of the best I've seen in this genre. Unfortunately I read the whole thing in a week and the last update was over a month ago. Hopefully updates pick up a bit.
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I like the story . So far its super good and i really recommend this story to those who seek a wonderfull story✌