The story is actually good. I really like reading fan fiction for anime series like bleach. But alas, just like one of my favorite novels Dimensional overhaul it lacks sufficient number of chapters
Good book! Novels of this quality are hard to come by! Highly recommend! Just power up trough the soft beginning, it gets much, much better! The other parts of the novel are incredibly good from the start! The grammar, story and worldbuilding are great.
Author supporting his work, as you do.
This is an updated version, I'm deleting the previous one.
I promise a quite action filled series, with a lot of schemes, some politics, and a healthy dose of revenge, to top it off. I like my plot-twists, so expect them (or actually don't, that'd spoil them ;) )
I managed to win Silver Prize for WPC #194 (I actually started writing this for that). This will be updated daily, entirely based on YOUR support ;)
Finally Volume 1 - The Rise of Temptation, has finally been completed, and with that, Volume 2 is starting!
Thanky you so much for your support up until now, and I'm hoping that you'll continue doing so from now on as well! :D
Have fun reading,
B. Manatee
trash he can't even discipline his child and just let them go make trouble again and again and again, then he will go act like a pitiful dog then if that doesn't work the face slapping starts rinse and repeat
idk what to say man, but it feels like it has been years since a book that I've genuinely liked has been translated on this site
When you say Ranger. Is that the title they are given the players or is it what the main character is going to be? I am just confused which is why i am asking this question.
shouldn't it be 40 chapters
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Great story, dont listen to those saying synopsis is fake, its all a build up. For example latsdt chapter he got sword intent and also got the ability to talk to animals. Reccomdndd 10/10
I really enjoy what ive read so far Its s different version of let me game in peace I really hope this gets picked Cant wait to see where this goes
I have read all the way up to chap 36 so far. I am having a hard time finishing the book.
The morgiana girl seems to be shaping up to be the love interest so far. It does seem way too early to commit to someone unless the character will grow later and be with someone else but I doubt it with the way the author is writing him up. For a thirty year old person he does act like a kid (even the excuse of staying in character is a little bit exxagerated). One of the main reason people read reincarnation/rebirth novels is to have an MC that acts maturely and does not get flustered when he see a beautiful woman everytime...like seriously there was Victoria's Secret models on earth, why is he getting shocked all the time.
As for character design it is very vague, I don't know if the author doesn't know how to write character description or just women's description. But they are all beautiful and the only thing I know is their beauty ranking. Honestly if you have a hard time writing description, as the MC is from earth you can use famous people to describe them to help us picture them.
Another weird thing, that huang jin or yin guy asked morgiana to be his concubine but his wife refused to give herself to another man (why the double standard? Is the wife ok for him taking multiple women ...is a woman recognized as the top beauty in a city, a genius cultivator OK with sharing her man? Unless there is some type of abuse going on either mental or physical I really don't see something like that going on. Even more in a world where power is everything, no matter how much power the man is, the more established a woman is the less she can compromise.
There is a reason why rich men statistically don't marry rich, powerful, independent women. There is usually a disconnect. "power couples" is usually in the realm of fantasy, there is always a give and take in relationship even in so called power couple in real life.
I will try to read more chapters and update later my review if I see some improvements as usually people get better as they write.
It seems it is not a harem novel from an author comment I read. Which is pretty good. But just because it is not harem story doesn't mean author you should scare away from exploring relationship and growth. People change, and someone you liked at 15 may not be the right person at 40 or 30 when you know yourself more or just life happens. I mean the high divorce rate nowadays that divorce is no longer taboo is a good proof of that.
So far the most fun and interesting love interest I have in asian novels here is the one from Swallowed star where the girl was obese and the MC still fell in love with her ( yes she lost weight but that was after the MC reciprocated her feelings).
Worth taking the time to read .