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Shameless author review here.It's my my first story. So there will be a lot of mistakes. I hope you will forgive me and and tell me where i did the mistake. It will be like a noobs writing but hope you will find the plot interesting. Here I tried something new with matching wrestling with system. I know my writing kinda sucks so you can curse at me but please do tell what i could add to make the story better.Well who am i Rambling to. I don't even have views ?
Love it, its a great story that really detailed about the world and its surroundings. Its concept is also something I have never read so its new to me.
was enjoying it until the time travel part , sad to drop this ....
I have so much fun reading this book, it is so well-explained. Also, the way the author adds humor to the story and the characters' dialog is quite smooth, I can feel their needs and efforts. Btw, the ml's behavior and manner are so kyute!! >< making me root for him all along. He is not the best character but he fights with all his life. Come take my heart baby!! <3
I like the direction, every time i think i know what's going on it honestly surprises me. Not a masterpiece but very much worth reading many moments and characters really grab you
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Thanks for reading my book. Though I will give the problems on this book. Especially since some of them could be fatally disturbing.
The Unsynchronization between the info on chapter 1 and 3: The user number on the AppStore is manipulated by the system itself.
Chapter 37: It's really the biggest turnoff as far as I know. Well, tbh, I plan so the relationship between him and her could be different. Yeah, he still likes her and he would find a way to get her heart again. Don't worry though, he will be changed back as soon as the business with the Russians is over.
That's all I can give for now. Thanks for reading this.
this book is amazing and I cant wait for the next chapters to come out. Amazing work author you should be proud of yourself and the work you put in
I'm not joking, this book is dope. What interests me the most here is the maim character. How can someone be so fleshed out in just the 29 chapters, it baffles me. The world building is interesting, but I hope it adds a little more uniqueness within the chinese xianxia genre. All in all, a book well worth reading!
Your story is really cool. It is really detailed and amazing to read. The title is also intriguing and the synopsis helped me a lot. I am very excited to see your future works. Keep up the good work.
5/5 d(=^・ω・^=)b
Wow this is one of the best descriptive books I've read! ヽ(=^・ω・^=)丿
Each scene forms a vision in my mind as I read through each word (ะ`・ω・´ะ)
I hope the author continues writing it! V(=^・ω・^=)v
