I like this novel....very very good thank for story..
Well, for the 20 or so chapter, you'll have every trope that a xianxia novel can have throw at you. I'm talking about the seeming thrash clan/family/group heir with great potential, the overly strong maid/butler, the transmigrant and time traveler which can pull out of his as* all the mumbo jumbo in the existence, and, last but not least, a obnoxius enemy young master in the power play.
But the people like it, so if that is your thing, rejoice.
IF THE CHAPTER COUNT STILL IS 609 DON'T BOTHER TO PICK THIS UP!
The story in itself is okay. Characters are fine. But that's it. Its okay to read and I enjoyed it even. But qidian needs to find a translator to finish this up. So as long they don't find someone taking the project over don't bother to start.
Amazing first 19 Chapters. We have growing world tension and world building (the mystery surrounding the changes in the past millenia is rife with conspiracy). Although our MC is Chinese he immediately dons his character’s name…major plus for acclimating to his ”new” environment.
Translation quality is also superb.
Hmm…No annoying characters (yet), a compelling overarching mystery driving the plot forward, and a decent MC (hopefully he gets more development when he interacts with his old companions)…
5 Stars.
Thank you very much for this guide. It helped a lot and has many practical instructions. I hope you increase the update rate since a lot of us are currently writing our novels and need this as soon as possible. There are certain topics I hope you'd address in the next chapters. One problem that is bugging me is how can I do plot twist, I hope that my novel is different from the average one and I don't want it to be like the reader would expect. I also have a problem with the number of arcs in the story. I made a basic outline for the whole plot and feel that my novel is too short. Should I add some side stories?
I personally really enjoy the story, it shows you the other side of humans. And overall is just a good read, quality is really high with barley any mistakes or grammatical errors. The MC is a weakling in the beginning but slowly turns badass and I mean BADASS. But yeah read it before you decide weather is good or not, but you won't be disappointed.
Been reading the raws and while i first wrote another review, i do not believe it anymore.
Translation/updates - No problems here
Story - Lots of problems here. You can replace the clan with a company and it makes no difference. The tamed beast dont appear in the story often and is only used as transportation (and luck gathering) othen then that they may as well not exist. The mc is way above the rest of the clan in cultivation as such, the clan is of no help in any fight and doesnt really appear.
character - At the start the characters are stil a little fleshed out but as the story goes on they all become 2d. They have no thoughts of their own. Everyone is impressed by the mc intellect and planning even tho the reader prob wouldnt be (everyone but mc dumb)
World background - There is none... Nothing is really explained or detailed enough, everything is left for you to imagine how it looks like. You get the bare minimum to work with and thats it.
(I would personally stil rate it higher to about a 3.5 or 4 simply because i do enjoy reading it but there are a lot of flaws that can anger someone)
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Only 2 chapters in but it looks promising. Grammer is decent and it's not the exact rehash that most stories use.
Hoping the character will be less face slapping and more of a canny MC.
Nice plot l must say .... Author hasn't upload more but still l can say that l is a very interesting story that everyone should try reading...
All the best author and plzzz do upload a lot and so that l can read more
Sorry, would you like to exchange reviews with me?
Good story idea