Translation is horrible the novel is meh and I couldn’t keep reading it after chapter 15
The story does have world building capability but it seems the author possibly is saving that for another story in his “connected universe” of novels. The author does a fairly decent job of providing comic relief and writing characters with a modicum amount of depth and background. The ending seemed rushed with a lot of plot elements just washed over or not resolved. Overall a 3.5-4/5. Not as expansive/great as the Soul Land novels by the same author.
absolutely amazing novel and the aristocrats are getting slapped in the face. the girls are interesting to say the least and the concept of literally forging maidens is is of the charts of ideas.
A fascinating story. Can't wait for new chapters.
*coughs confidently*
This the original by me :
I want to be the very best,
Like no one ever was.
To tame them is my real test,
To train them is my cause!
(I will travel across the land,
Searching far and wide.
Each Astral Beast to understand
The power that's inside!)
Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!
It's you and me,
I know it's my destiny!
Astral Beast!!!
Oh, you're my best friend,
In a world we must defend!
Astral Beast!!
Gotta tame em' all!
(A heart so true,
Our courage will pull us through!)
You teach me and I'll teach you,
Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!
Gotta tame em' all!
Every challenge along the way,
With courage I will face!
I will battle every day,
To claim my rightful place!
Come with me, the time is right,
There's no better team with a system!!
Arm in arm, we'll win the fight,
It's always been our dream!
Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!
It's you and me,
I know it's my destiny!
Astral Beast!!
Oh, you're my best friend,
In a world we must defend!
Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!
(A heart so true,
Our courage will pull us through!)
You teach me and I'll teach you,
Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!
Gotta tame em' all!
Gotta tame em' all!
Gotta tame em' all!
Gotta tame em' all!
Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!
It's you and me,
I know it's my destiny!
Astral Beast!!!
Oh, you're my best friend,
In a world we must defend!
Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!
(A heart so true,
Our courage will pull us through!)
You teach me and I'll teach you,
Astral Beast!!!
Gotta tame em' all!
Gotta tame em' all!
ASTRAL BEAST!!!
- BY LORD_OF_ORIGIN
............................... Great read ...................................................... Lots of drama.............. ................
Although I’m not a big fan of apocalypse novels, I do like zombies and undead stuff especially necromancy eh I’m getting off topic anyway I recommend this novel I tried it as a heck but I actually liked it so do try and give it a shot.
I’m an author myself and I know that shadow strives for improvement so if u can do help him, he will always ask for it I know that for sure.
This is a review up to chapter 53.
I was a little doubtful at first, because the beginning was quite abrupt, the reaction of the MC was completely unrealistic, and it seemed very fast paced. But as the novel picked up and things progressed, I was actually really intrigued and could not put this down, wanting to see more of the development of the civilization in the sandbox. The introduction of a smaller sandbox with players was actually fascinating as well, although I had my doubts at first, I actually really liked what it added. In general, I would say this is very much the type of novel I enjoy, and though the beginning was rough, it ended up being very interesting and well written I think. I really, really, really hope this is selected for voting.
Goddamn, I got baited real hard. I thought this'll be a good novel and hoping for a good read, but nope I got backstabbed and roundhouse kicked on the back of my head instead. For those of you who haven't fell for this trap already, I adviced you to stay away from this if you're not into NTR. Damn CUCK...
interesting so far.interesting so far.interesting so far.interesting so far.interesting so far.interesting so far.interesting so far.interesting so far.
Ch12 - Who cares about the price of cake
This is a story about money and brands, written like a school report.
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all right. this is just the early chapter review, but I found the writing quality solid. as I have seen the author's improvement in the last work, I'm sure he has planned the whole story. 1 thing I didn't like that much in previous work is it followed cannon for a bit long, and manipulation of novel and never falling in love. though that won't be a problem here since this is original and mc is a demon god. so I'm guess he won't be falling in love. but I hope that he is not detached from all emotions. i don't wanna follow an emotionless MC's journey. at least he should have acquaintances. i hope he marries and have child(in later parts of the stories). and have at least some emotional attachment to people. especially since he was a human once and transmigrated. I'll make another review after 100 or so chapter when plot has moved forwards, but right now it has solid mc and good world building.