Arthuremberheart
Your story is absolutely mesmerizing! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! I'm completely hooked and craving more! Keep it up! #ObsessedWithSaitama!!! [img=recommend]
Don't pick this up. This great book has been ruined by a crappy translator. It's not worth the distress. The translator disappears for weeks at a time, never communicates with the fan base, and just recently skipped 5 chapters. I've held on for a long time, hoping the translator will get better, but I'm finally dropping it for good.
the story seems good and everything but this has to be the most confusing thing I've ever read, my brain is hurting from this grammar, I could read a chapter and not understand anything, but the book has potential
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The first thing to say would be the unique way of author's writing as this is the first time I read a story written in such a way. And honestly, it is good. Just POV and the third-person perspective confused me at first but then it became clear.
Keep it up.
WEBNOVEL NOTICE THIS BOOK. ITS COMPLETELY MESSED UP. FIX IT PLEASE..
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Fun lazy mc slow life so far I like
Nice story but please increase the frequency of new chapters
The premise would have been good if not for the recurring stupid characters and forced plots that happen solely for the mc. Such as being disdained literally by breathing air. And the "coincidental" examination of disciples of which the mc partakes and dominates. What's even ridiculous is that the supposed "geniuses" were nothing but characters with no depth, purely made to act as a pedestal for the mc's glory. They saw the mc easily dealing with the prior opponent but they still underestimate him, it would have been better if they at least have been a little more cautious, but no, they instead fought to be the first to fight the mc calling him "prey." I understand that the mc's abilities have to be showcased every now and then but please, don't do it in a very ludicrous way. Even a toddler would be cautious to a certain degree once a situation takes a turn from what was otherwise expected. In summary, add more depth to the characters and don't force events for the convenience of the mc like "an event that only happens for a century" or "a village attacked out of nowhere, and the mc is put in the position of defending." Make a clear outline of what the characters are, their personalities, abilities, and such. It will help make the characters appear unique among others instead of the usual "opposing and worshipping characters" where they either worship, oppose, or some "ice-cold super genius woman that frowns upon men but was taken aback by the mc's strength hence falls head over heels" cliché. Make the story a little more alive, that's all I'm asking.
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It's basically a misunderstandings novel but with a female protagonist swapped in. There's a harem, tournament arc and everything else you would expect. Not the greatest ever, but I enjoyed the mtl
This is very pleasing and interesting to read, though a little hard to comprehend the writing style of the story. The novel is good, nothing more, nothing else.
