If you read this for its tags, prepare to get roasted. This book is a parody of web novel cliches, and I've been laughing as much as I'm questioning my taste in books. The mc is intelligent at the start for once, which is nice as well. However... he also makes poor decisions imo. At least they're thought out. We'll see who's right as the story progresses
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Enchanting! the synopsis itself got me hooked Can't wait to start reading [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I saw sport genre and instantly hooked! Author please publish more and more❤️
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Hello my dear readers, Ero_Hacker here!
I will be posting again and like any shameless author, 5 stars!
I hope you enjoy what I wrote and I will try to post 1~2 Chapters a day!
Know that I have +220 Chapters written when I posted the first 5 Chapters, so look forward to many more in the future!
There is absolutely no logic in here, so the family of the mc is exterminated vy the royal family and the stargaze family with a direct implication from anna stargaze the " love interest ", the two met after the girl came back from the future to steal all the opportunities from the mc, and like in the arc of days since they've the mc goes from killing from sight, to her food is really good and she smells nice, i should do what she says and help her.
This is bullshi* his family was killed recently yet he somehow is fine with helping the killer. I don't care if in the future we find that she wasn't completely at fault (we even have a memory of the girl where she begs her father to kill all of them and to not leg go of the mc) how can a normal human being do such a thing? if it was my family i wold have no problems in killing entire cities just to harm their killer, yet he helps her? why he dosen't try to stab her in the back while they fight enemies? why he helps her in stealing his opportunities? How can he be such a beta?
And at last why does this novel have more than a million views yet only 29 reviews, all of which good?
It is a good novel. Don't get me wrong. It has good writing quality and adequate world development . But what ticks me off is its ridiculous slow pace development of the MC. MC is very weak at the start. He takes an oath that he would be stronger than everyone so that he could protect his loved ones. But sadly, the MC does very little to get stronger. I have read a lot of chapters and the MC is still a one star mage. The concept of system is very poorly used for the MC's growth. I know the MC is young as compared to his ridiculously overpowered harem members. But at this pace , MC is gonna need atleast 2000 chapters of story development to atleast come close to his harem members powers let alone his enemies . when I read the description of the novel, I thought MC would go to great lengths to increase his power quickly rather than fooling around with his woman who are marginally stronger than him. I am not blaming the author or novel per se. But this is not my type of novel.
I actually really liked this story despite all its flaws. I can tell that the author gradually grew as they wrote more, and I honestly think the story was progressing in a good direction. Despite this, there were quite a few plot holes and weird jumps in logic, but I think it was moreso due to a lack of experience in writing. I hope you continue to write and grow.
It's a good story and have fun elements also. it's from other perspective of story where villain have also role for its character. It's all good just time flies realy fast man 2.5k years have gone in the story if disciples go for experience then they came after decades not just 1 or 2 years. In this I really feel that they are really cultivators have long life but I think it's also too much dude 100 years are ok but 2.5k seems to long with their talent and resources. All in all it's a good story.
It feels like, I am watching a high-quality movie. I read a lot of english novels that good but this is above them. It just that. Excellent ?
this story fun to read and at start maybe he look weak as story developed he become something else . mc is Not a dumb char he is pretty good at what he is doing . world background is unknown little explained. maybe because he is in taboo relationship ???. I liked relationship mc maintained. can tell me will he put his hand on all relatives you know 4 generation if yes thankyou ?.