Overall the story is well written, the characters have personalities that I quiet like, the progress of the story is not slow and not too fast. Some part of the story might be a little cliched but I still like it. Some of the other reviewers also said so. The only bad thing i have about the book is the stability of the updates. I dont know what is the schedules of the updates. I dont know why this book is low ranked but it is a very good book that needs to have a stable updates. I hope in the future you will prioritize this book along with the other book of yours.
This is great! Sect building with a bunch of nice brats it’s very good slice of life stuff.. plus there’s a cute little fox
like the cat says mooooooooooooooooioore
Writing as of chapter 8: The story development and world background is slowly building up and his interesting to see. The characters interactions are interesting and feel real. There is a nice twist to the tower, dungeon genre as the MC isn't the only one reincarnating. It seems to hold potential.
I might update this review as I continue reading it!
Waiting!!!!!!!!!
Release it faster!Release it faster!
Release it faster!Release it faster!
Release it faster!Release it faster!
Release it faster!Release it faster!
Release it faster!Release it faster!
was skeptical at first, but I was pleasantly surprised. nice sized chapters and no grammar or spelling issues. the mc is ok, you do get the nerd feel from the mc, but the author doesn't go out of his way to show it. It's hard to explain, but it's good. hope the author continues
Hello, review time.
first of all i usually writte review, if i writte one, between 50-150 chapters not so early, but as i read authors notice of it will help hus story i will do so. as this story should have attention of readers, at least those who love football.
so, i do in seriousness:
writting quality: 5* - even if you can find there some grammar wrongdoings, they are so little or not so important that you will have any problem to understand story or it will not annoy you in any way. author even stopped using weeks to his aging, and puting only age there, so there are no more confusion, so i dont find needs to lower rating there.
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Story development: 5* story is focused on football, which i consider right thing to do, mean there arent to many neccesary part pf story which would be usseless a little of slice of life there is is fine as its in good chemistry with the football part of story. even his girlfriend (not officialy yet) and his mon has some show up but not to much that it would postpone the story, which i find with great appreciation, so its all good. only note which i find a bit a pity is, POV of others persons. what i mean, for example commentator of matches are done well and trainers too, occasionaly spectators too, that is all well. but to side story for example there is mentioned clubs like chealsea, barca, real are curious about MC, well if its true, why not put some managers talk out there, or some club happening in backstage out of Izan knowing it, well just thats is my feeling, but overall story is developing in fine and good way, so thumbs up. btw you can even see author, how he is getting better, mb not in each chapter but when you see start of story and see ch.20+ for example i can see the developement of author himself (positively) well next.
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Character design: 5*. Izan is good boy for me, he, he isnt stupid, but clever. but now what i found somehow surprised author put that he is good in study which i am surprised, not that those who do atletics ar edimb but doing top of class is rlly rare. but i dont mind it, as he as character rlly do things as smartass, he rlly upping his stats in overall way which is not bad to do, just i already mentioned in some comments, he should also focus on some stat where he will be original and one of the best in team, for example 30 percent of his point to give always to this stat (passing, dribling, avaranes whatever choosen) and 70 percent giving to his overall grow up, but thats just how i feel he should do, i am not author so whatever :D you will rlly like Izan anyway.
other characters, well i think they are put there, and i dont feel like they have to small time of show up, by me its in optimal way. next up.
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updating stability: for now i will give 5*, story is new and is updated rlly well i just hope author will keep it up a d dont drop it.
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world background: 4* true be told, apart that its mentioned its post messi and ronaldo era, we dont know anything about happenings in the world at all, not that we need it right now, but i cant give full rate here, as there were a lot of great guys in football, and we dont even know if we see them in story as of now, even as a managers for example, Pavel Nedvěd, star of Lazio, after Juventus who went do job for his club as manager in Juventus, i know i mention someone from my country but i put it as example, but story is in early stage mb we will see Manager Messi, Ronaldo, Cole or others in it in future. who know :D so thats only stat where i lower rating for story.
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Overall story is great and even if author go premium, i plan to read it, and in my clear conscience i can recomend this story for reading. i personaly when i have 3 power stones rdy i always give 1 to this story alongside two others i rlly like to read curently.
So thanks Author for your work, for story you showing up, and pleas dont drop it.
I like the plot of the story. It depicts the life of modern young professionals. Let's see the development of the story on the next chapters.
124k views and not one review? Are you srs well at least I have the honor of being first review can’t wait for volume 2.
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for anyone who likes Japanese cultures and anime like me would find this interesting great plot and characters that keep u hooked on reading plus u can feel the characters grow by each chapter not to mention the abilities each character have i mainly like stuff with some superpower and things like that xD it has some mystery vibe to it too like the whole situation with the "white demon" making u wonder just what he is.
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A book involves Starsigns and other things integrated with fantasys elements and system. I believe with time and more chapters. It would be in a good level and position to read.