The first chapter is really good you could feel MC's fear and stress.
I don't know but synopsis kinda remembered me a little "Squid Game" ( synopsis was short but good)
Overall it seems a story with a nice plot and i think it will turn out a good one.
Good job author
I love this so much and I’m surprised I haven’t written a review for this yet. There might be a few grammar problems like capalization for names but that can be overlooked. The plot has been progressing at a good place in my opinion so far. The world is unique and there’s just so much we haven’t seen yet! The characters are cute in their own way and although we haven’t seen a ton of their facets and stuff, I still love them! I’m so excited when we get more chapters as the author is a bit busy with irl stuff so there aren’t too many chapters, but the potential of this novel keeps me here. Thanks for all the hard work author! I hope everything is going well for you!
Hey guys! The Author here. Was thinking to review or not but thinking it wouldn’t hurt I guess.
I would appreciate any feedback, the tone, pacing, writing. All is appreciated. If you want to see a successful or unsuccessful policy implemented by the character as well, please do put it in the comments.
Great writing quality, just needs a bit more work on the world background. But still, very nice updating stability but go to sleep for once. By the way, perhaps you'll need a proof-reader~
i hate system who give's quest which failure means death or any penalty. instead of guiding him it's forcing him. he doesn't even need that system with his past experience, worst of all their is a death penalty 'what a joke'
Before this novel was selected by an editor I honestly avoided it because of the reviews; I realize I do this with a lot of novels that have low reviews and I don't even bother to give them a try. Now that i've read it I found i quite like it. I think from today onward I won't bother reading or paying attention to opinionated reviews that praise or scold a novel simply on their personal taste. I suggest others also just give a novel a try and form your own opinions yourself.
finally atleast the mc has balls this time literally and physically .
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Short but satisfying novel. It was like a breath of fresh air, I really loved it.
The ending brought tears to my eyes - in a good way. I would suggest everyone to try it out.
If you are looking for something enjoyable to read that is not too long, then give this one a go!
As an author I'll be shameless to rate my novel 5 star.
The novel is just started, I be working on mostly about the characters development, and the cultivation world.
I'll try my best to upload 1 chapter for 2 days.
Have fun reading the book
my head hurts its too fast ....................................................................................................................................
It’s a great action story that’s moves at a good pace. It has and interesting story concepts with great characters to follow. It’s very descriptive and proves terrific imagery.