[Reviewed on: 12-06-2021]GOOD POINTS:- Comical vibe through the chara of female demon/devil- MC is reasonably smart, not too dumb to cringe at all- The flow and pace is fine too- Apparently there are no issues in grammar [will explain further below]- Storyline somewhat resembles 'my pick up artist system' but no it's not a fanfic- MC has a goal to achieve or he will die- At first it gave me 'death note' vibe, then the devil felt a succubus to me as she emerged- It was entertaining~WEAKNESS:- Synopsis doesn't really tells what's inside, it should be more elaborative on the contract aspect- The initiative strategy in chapter 1 is extremely wrong- No one wants to read the routine of MC, his house, work, what he is wearing, food, etc- The narration is in personal/1st person but the repetition of 'I' is annoying, in about five lines 'i' is overly used seven times!- 1st chapter should have begun by the later half, the upper half is completely dump in my opinion. Since 2 and 3rd chapters are without fillers and absolutely good with hooks, while 1st [initial half] is a turn off.- Devil can read his mind but at places she doesn't respond to his thoughts, why?
author quite frankly if cain and kali end up against eachother in any way were going to have to throw hands and thats on god dont tempt me do you understand 1v1 rust noscopes because i will not be reading anymore i swear
I can't say much, It's good in it's own way but the quality of it's writing is quite a problem. The space between dialogue and narration is too tight, sometimes it makes me confused and lost.
But the story is overally good, kudos to the author!
This novel has one of the most op mc i have ever seen, the buff are also pretty creative ,other characters are basically what you can see in any op mc novel , the world design is ok to be honest
Overall good novel to binge if you are bored
This story is a five-star from me.
Although the synopsis isn't attractive enough, but the plot hooks me from the prologue.
The character design and world development are awesome. Good job, author.
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story so far. It is a big difference to the novels filled with conspiracy, drama and all that plotting. A fairly heartwarming and satisfying read. I hope that this novel will continue so that myself and others can enjoy it.
you can read it on mtlnovel "protect our patriarch"
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Read it till MC gets recruited into the Poison Sect.
Don’t like how the MC suddenly left his harem, like when other princes were eyeing his harem MC blows his cover in order to protect them but a few chapters later when he became King he abandons them to go with his aunt to cultivation sect.
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Ahahaha I read it as a fatherless child not fateless lol
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