Only read a few chaps tbh but I like the story so far, it has a unique premise and I like the mc, I will keep on reading to know more about Aiden and his journey ahead. Good luck and keep up the good work author.
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aaah!!!! A DEVIL again for me to love! ?
Just 5 chapters and you took and hooked my heart with your characters and story.
As expected from you:
1. never start a novel with normal set-ups.
2. first chapter itself will be enough to hook anyone to read further
3. characters will steal your heart ?
4. story will be in a way that one will crave for more
5. Story-world will be detailed enough for one to imagine and move around them as you are a part of it.
What else you are looking for in a book to read?!!
Congratulations and all the best for your new hard work dear Novella. love for you and your new Baby ? @Mynovel20
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this is the second book of this genre I'm reading. it's not my favorite genre, but every once in a while I stumble upon gems like this. flow is amazing, pace is perfect. it's amazing!added to my library and will be reading.
I wont lie this sounds like Rebirth of the Godly Prodigal (Hong Dali) and Losing Money to be a Tycoon (Pei Qian) but in a cultivation world setting, Ill definitely love this!
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Overall: A solid 4*But I can say one thing for sure: The MC is quite dumb. I am a logical person and find myself very often frustrated reading about how the MC is reacting or how she does certain things. Another thing I find kind of annoying are the small but plenty written mistakes. The best example is instead of "tried
this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................this doesnt deserve to have the first like 600 chapters premium when they havent been for years................................
Honestly, I loved the first 310 or so chapters, translation was good, world building and power system had some good ideas, story was developing and enough to keep me interested. This book really focused on the storylines of different players and how the gaming community would interact with a game like in the book. However, I rated this so low because it went on a long almost year long break with no updates, now it is back and the translation has taken a nosedive in quality, it seems almost machine translated with no proofreading. Recommend first 300 chapters, unless they fix the translation, don’t bother past that