REFO
In short the story is about a 25 year old gets transmigrated to a world with monster, killing whom grants you skills. Has a big sister who needs him in his team so he has to become stronger fast which seems to be the short term Boss fight. The story isn’t all vanilla, Some dark sides of human character is already shown. Overall with a humorous MC and nice side characters the book looks great.
Details:
World background: Earth has opened portals to various planes which are filled with monsters. Humanity evolved by killing this monsters and taking their skills.
Mc: The trucksan was on holiday so the transmigration Of MC was done by slapkun. Mc is a 25 year old in a 15 year old’s body. He is quite likeable. Isn’t a psychopath, So killing monsters did affect him at the start. So far he is quite calm about things, and uses his brain. Though because he is new to the world most of his training path is decided by his sister.
Cheat: At the starting base his powers are both good and bad for him, He only has 9 skill slots while even the most average people have 15-17 slots. But the cheat allows him to save 2 skills in 1 slot and they are able to be upgraded. But his body is too weak so his cultivation speed is very slow compared to how much his upgraded skills cost.
Side characters: Currently the two most focused side characters are MC’s sister her best friend Both of whom are strong high schoolers. Their relationship is quite smooth for now. The Mc also got to know some schoolmates not sure if they will continue to be there in the story. So far it looks like if the Author introduces a named character he doesn’t just let them go after a chapter, But keeps using them so its not a waste to remember their names.
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This is a good story. After completion of the original story, this gives the reader something to look forward for more. Awaiting for more update.
I've read every chapters and I can say that the characters can all be described with a single sentence:
- Ji Li - Stupid big-breasted Loli that lust for MC's beauty
- Cat Southnorth - Arrogant Cat Demon Loli
- 2nd Senior Sister - Cold, stuttering and skinny.
MC always has the same interaction with them, he thinks of Ji Li as a 'stinking little sister that craves for his body' and 'someone who sold her brains to the heaven for breasts', he wants to fatten the second senior sister because she's too skinny.
Also, although this story has the same premise as 'The legendary Mechanic' and 'I am a legendary boss', this time, MC is transported to a xianxia game where he actually consider himself as a living of this world unlike in TLM where MC just think of NPC as NPC. The game elements aren't always present and this feels a bit more like a weird Xianxia.
He also at first seems like a Sword Cultivator but he can't for weird reasons that should be explained with further chapters.
I agree with akhbar 89 this novel is confusing and tries to add way to much information withought consolidating there ideas l. I admit I only read the first 15 chapters and even that was a chore,however so many issues have popped up that makes it hard to read.
1st the status of the mc makes. no since, he is a tranmigrator that somehow also knows of the most popular vr game "War" major players even though his suppose to be from a different world. He is supposedly the world maker/ system while at the same time blending in as a average character who is barely above the supposed professional gamers. what realy got me is he complained about not getting a specialized class advancement event hough easily starts recommending hidden classes to other players and he supposedly designed the hundreds of classes.
2nd its way to confusing abouight if this is another world in invading physical plain, virtual world game impacting physical world, excedra
3rd character development is terrible. as of so far character development is pretty much , oh this person is... profession player in war as ...class , so they choose .. class.
4th in my oppion the real world elements makes this novel feel dull , as it seems to me it results in alot of deposition that will likely be pointless in the future; when suddenly the novel goes back to the action the characters have suddenly leveled up alot.
it for this primary reasons I find this novel confusing and can not recommend it.
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It's really good and,give it a shot and it will definelitely catch your intention.Brion is improving good and the universe is written well.I expect great things from this novel.
Well this novel is new to me. The concept is really amazing. Reincarnation is not a new concept but reincarnated as an insect is surely new. This is really interesting. Keep up the good work.
In a site full of mostly Chinese novels, this is a breath of fresh air. Surprisingly the author isn’t racist toward the Japanese and you can tell he researched well because of all the mythology and spirits. It’s like cultivation in a modern world but a whole new game and different kind of levels. The translation and editing is some of the best I’ve seen in a while too. I hope this gets chosen, so please guys, give it a try.
I absolutely love the story that I seem not to get enough of it. Just wanna read it as time pass by but left disappointed that I finished reading chapter 32. What I love about this story are the elements of transmigration in a parallel world becoming a dad of a kid, becoming a better version of himself through the means of a seemingly a system that came up late, becoming a streamer and the beginning of a master of all trades. It was a good combination making one of the best stories I've read. It's still not finished but it left me wanting for more, I even regretted that I gave all my power stones of this day to a novel instead of giving it to this story. It's a fun story to read, entertaining and just chill. I firmly recommend this story???
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Out of the 51 chapters posted, I have read 10 chapters. The story is interesting. The stability of updates is good, Story is developing nicely. The character design is OK. A world background is good but it is not specified which era it is or what place it is.There are some issues with typos and spellings. The capital for 'I' is used less and the small i is appearing. At some places the sentences start abruptly and the inverted commas of the speech portion get left behind. These mistakes do not however interfere with the reading of the book.I would suggest you run your draft through an online grammar checker. It will get rid of many of the errors. I also do that otherwise little mistakes tend to creep in.All the best.
