New translator? The previous translator is mistycloud ?. Same translator with a novel genius doctor black belly miss. I’ve been waiting to continue to read this novel so long. I hope the translator will give mass release chapters, but 9 chapters????? I’ve read more hundreds chapters. Till when I can wait to continue to read the story?
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This book is amazing, it's lively i love it so crazy
1. Characters are sloppy. Main character in particular can't seem to control himself and the author's portrayal of him is shaky as **** as his character changes from chapter to chapter, going from unsteady in one chapter to professional assassin in another with no foreshadowing. Similarly, plot line forces MC to make MANY MANY STUPID decisions for him to end with "I need to learn how to do xxxx better next time." Guess what happens when next time comes. It horribly idiotic and it never stops even after 200 chapters. Other characters are more consistent, but that has more to do with they being 1 dimensional rather than author's abilities. 2. word selection by author is awkward and the way they address each other can get on your nerves. 3. Story development is also non-existent. MC has little to no goals other than to graduate from academy and presumably slack off somewhere. His character however does not match as he can suddenly get hot blooded, suddenly fiery, and then regret once the fight is over because he showed off too much. Note that this does not change and he continues to do stupid things to show off repeatedly to no benefit whatsoever.
Classic, writing a story to make a quick buck and never finishing it.
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I tried to justify giving this more stars, but i can't bring myself to. I will detail on this below.The quality of the writing is very poor, with words that are misstyped and mismatched that ruin the context.Characters don't stay in character and move from one attitude to the next, without any justification for the transition.The dialogues are poorly matched to the atmosphere and toopic, often using formal speech poorly, thus ruining the immersion. There are decent things as well, such as the world building, the theme and relationships, but too many things were copied from Culti online that it does not seem original.Same MC name, Same dragon name, Similar physique, same power system so far. It's just hard to apreciate something unoriginal that seems like a cheap copy.Coming back to the bad points, this novel could use a full rewrite and edit. Too many mistakes to recover by this point.
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I really found this book interesting. There is a mystery regarding the main character's past and memories that really hook you into the story. Really fun read.
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I tried my hardest to keep on reading this story, but I just can't continue. All the author does it make comments about what happen to him at the website he release his story originally and not the story. I have left a few comments on some of the chapters, they weren't rude or over the top, just some thought on it. The author responded, instead giving a normal response to my comment, he told me to stop reading it, he was very defensive. I can understand from his story and comments response, he did not have a great time where he first release his story. People over their was beyond rude and would make anyone very upset, but my comments where nothing like that. Author if you spent more time on writing your story, ignored really hateful people, your stories would be better, but you seem that you like to bathe in those comments and never let it go. I hope in the future you can get past your experience before you came to Webnovel and be able to write great stories.