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so after reading 22 chapters today I decided to give this book a review for people wanting to start reading this book. The story development is pretty good so far and the time skips are crazy and perfectly written. character development I love the mc how he acts and stuff definitely worth reading I promise you won't regret it!
So excited to read more of this hope there will be more exciting episodes to look forward happy reading everyone ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Might be or is the best out of the trial read novels batch and might be our only magical realism chat group we going to get as every one that came failed but it being cultivation based might boost the odds.
i just couldnt get into this. there are many things wrong with it. it has some BS world background that overall doesnt make sense. author tried to translate VR into reality so he came up with AR (think google glasses). also his previous novel was bad even though it has many fans.
An overall good book, it leaves a lot to be imagined but I like it that way. I have been searching for a novel that incorporates a bookstore into its theme and this book delivered 20 fold, I think this is the only good bookstore novel on webnovel.
In every chapter author mentions the beauty of side characters 10times chapter 13 and still he explain they are really beautiful girls 100% V
Hello, author here.
First, I want to thank all of you for the support and the good feedbacks that you are giving me.
I plan to write a long story and to review it bit by bit to correct any grammatical mistakes that I find.
For now, you have my gratitude for sticking to my novel and I hope to keep seeing you all in the future.
Have a nice day.
As the first reviewer it's my responsibility to tell all of you that it is a "SYSTEM" NOVEL!!!!!!
*coughs proudly in front of mere mortals who will never get a system in their life*
*Bows*
It's a good novel marred by the fact that the mc is stupid and quite a pushover. You'd think the overlord would have one thing they're good at but that seems false that I wonder how the hell he became an overlord in the first place. He gets pushed by an ai, his teacher, goblin, and even a player. Sorry but I'm done. I can't bear read a novel about that but if you can look past it, it's decent. I can't however and I wouldn't continue this further.
That's a good story. On the current moment (Chapter 8) it's more developing the world background, but I'm anxious for what's next. On the moment, I just don't understand so good the bloodlines system. How they are chosen? Why two bloodlines for the Mc? For the concept of a game, it's don't make so much sense for the balance of the game. I want more development on this way on the future too.