this book is pretty much interesting before even I started reading it!!the synopsis is catchy
This is so cool! This is the story that I'll be rooting for until the end. I really love the simple details that I think the author had written with thorough research. For the author, good job on making the characters so badass that I remember the films I repeatedly watching.
at first, I liked the MC because he wants to Cultivate in peace but in the development of the story the MC looks like Coward and he wasted a lot of Opportunities to be stronger than he was but as I said he is a Coward
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Ive read this story to chapter 91 but i have to say the quality is good spelling and all that but reading this story gave me wip lash there is no real constant story to it everything changes and there is almost no link to the flow of the story caracters are half flushed i feel if the author could pick a direction in the story and stick with it and work on the caracters they could make a amazing story with their creativity but as this story is its almost as if its 4 stories half a.s.sedly stuffed together not to mention the random skips that unnecessarily jump time to progress plot where there was more to be shown and would of made the story far better with the detail at witch the story sorely lacks id rate this lower totally but the quality of the general writing was good and it seems to update often its the content of the story that lacks any real value and if the author can fix that could be a amazing writer as its the main part of any story
Giving it a five since I like story. ???. I read it for a day and it sucks that it stopped updating a month ago. The plot is interesting and I enjoyed it very much!
Only read this if you are interested in seeing a prototype. I started this novel with the hopes of making it something great but it instead became an experiment that got too out of hand to handle.There will be a sequel to this though so you can go ahead and read this if you want.However, it doesn't matter whether you read this or not, the sequel with be completely different and will only have the same world world base
After a long time a story managed to grab my attention.. Seems well thought out story. I can put it in words how well this story grabs attention from its readers. A rare gem, Totally worth reading this story
just as a fellow author i am i give this novel 4 because of the new world and the creation the author did.but ?the story is not so good i will say that as i also a writer i will say you should do something new story. like a normal family not the revenge type story. many readers readed the revenge type story thats the fan fiction is so popular this day.creat some new story. man not like this here every one can guess what your story main thing. like this title the book as a world overload.right most of readers will think about a Finally a different story. butyou just killed by writing your story a revenge with tragic story. where mc try to claim the power of the top to take revenge. and in this process you make mc life harder and giving him a ton of luck etc to survived the dead like scenario. this type of novel is all over the net. so do sometimes new. like the age of adapts if you read the novel. you will find that start is different from most of the other novel. except the reincarnation details that the author copyed it from the other novels. the rest are different and so does the Storyline is Also. the mc of this story almost died if not for his quick Brain.yes there is luck on mc but the author of age of adapts didnt put much except on 5 occasion of the entire novel. this all i have to say man. your novel had great potential if not for your revenge with tragic background and the mc lot of lucks.....
Overall it's an extremely enjoyable story, with a good concept, interesting characters, and great story development. Now I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next upload. Keep up the good work!
It us a rela story on some one's life and hope it will match with some others also. The writer aka Haji is reting his own real life story just by changing few names ?.
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