It's a bit confusing at first, a lot of missing information.
I know it must be a mystery, but knowing nothing makes me frustrated.
It seems to have a lot of potential, but I feel lost in the first chapters.
More, author I need more.
How about 2 chapters a day?
I would give 4 or 4.5.
I've been on here for months but this is my first review, and I've gotta say this book is amazing.the story and world building is greatthe MC is smart and decisively ruthless when provoked but isn't always out for blood.overall I love this book and am praying enough people read it and enjoy it so that the author has a reason to keep writing.
I just finished volume 1 and there hasn’t been any mention of necromancy. Given that it is in the title, I feel like it is false advertising. At best, the pacing and development is very slow.
I like this novel quite a lot . The writing quality is excellent the story development is quite good as everything is connected, every character has different personalities so they have a hint of realism not your typical 2d although the girls easily fall for him they take time to accept the relationship.Updates are on point and currently we have not yet travelled to another world but we have got previews of what is to come .The only problem which I have is maybe my personal problem , which is mc is too soft hearted and very passive.Like I know you don't need to kill everyone everytime but sometimes you need to get proper revenge because they deserve it ,for example ,the enemies of mc almost killed him,tried to r@pe his lovers and friends many times, did way to many horrible deeds that definately deserve death but mc got soft,and mc many times is repulsed by the fact of torturing of most irredemible villains, also he leaves his lifelong opponents who destroyed his everything just because of women , honestly it's kind of irritating when you don't get proper revenge. He can easily take revenge by using his resources and lovers but he doesn't,I don't know why he is just waiting for them to do something against him. Other than my personal problem everything is amazing just hoping that mc can get a little cold hearted for his enemies. But I am sure you gonna enjoy it cause iIam still reading it .
Just because I want to read more of this and to let this 'story' become more popular. I know it's a biased rating. But what can I say, I have got a refined taste if I do say so myself.
*I have read every single chapter up to 1736, skipping and skimming nothing*
Slight inclusion of very mild spoilers that mean nothing out of context ))
First, I have to say that the critics of the Vandal arc aren’t wrong. When I first read about the conscription, I assumed a time skip would be employed at some point. When they arrived at the Aeon corona system, I assumed time would be sped up on the planet rather than slowing down- this seemed like a great chance to accelerate the war ark.
Nevertheless, the MC grew a lot during the arc. It is a bit of a stretch, but this is shaping up to be a 5000 chapter story at this rate. Dedicating 600+ chapters to preliminarily shape the MCs character from a timid indoctrinated weakling into a prototype of a business leader able to survive in a cutthroat world has at least some merit.
Before you discount me completely- yes, I agree, there was some ‘false advertisement’. Being disconnected from the system for so long was counter to what most system novels do and many fellow readers will be justifiably annoyed at that.
Me? I have no issue. Whilst I love your standard system trope chewing gum novels as much as the next guy sometimes, this isn’t that. In one of the recent chapters, the author described serving in the army as a means, not an end. That is the same thing I have to say for my perspective on his usage of the system.
Whilst I cannot speak for the author, what I see from his work is an amalgamation.
In mech touch speak,
the design seed of the novel has taken fractured spiritual pieces from many different genres and used them to craft its own unique identity. Many people comment about the novel not conforming to expectations from various genres. Well... why should it?
In webnovel speak, why continue to define a story by the same tags it started with if the story has come to a point where they are no longer the best choice?
What if Ves loses the Metal Scroll for good? I’m sure the readers will riot(I’m sure the thought of introducing this plot element gives the author a headache for this reason) , but my point is that what if it makes the story better for it?
Unlike so many people saying how the story has deteriorated, I have actually read the whole thing word for word. Whilst I agree that there were times where I was weary with parts of the story, I have never been disappointed.
When ves returns from war, the Story picks up and becomes so much more phenomenal. The start of the new mech generation and his new mechs with their expanding repertoire of abilities are increasingly interesting to read about
Tbh,I really tip my hat to the author. Perhaps the difference between phase tech mechs and mastercraft mechs are a subtle jibe at the non conformity of this story to cookie cutter ideologies.
I’m sure any mildly intelligent person can think up 100 arguments against anything they wish.
‘Mech designers are unstable, hence justifying the MC making retarded decisions that help the plot’
I’ll take that excuse at face value. Why not? It makes for an interesting plot point.
‘the novel is so much about business but the business aspect isn’t realistic’
I’m entertained reading about it. I’m not a business magnate myself, nor do I expect the author to be too perfect?
‘What’s with cultivation? Why doesn’t it work like this or like that?’
Spirituality is obscure. Can the author make it more obvious? Does a massive pirate ship full of spirituality users not hammer home the point that only the strongest organisations really use it? Whilst Ves always calls it his unique advantage, there have been many hints in the story that he is well aware that he is not unique. He is aware that he is reinventing the wheel in some areas. He chooses not to think about that because it is not helpful to him.
Many things are inherently open to debate. The author is building a universe. Where’s the fun if it’s perfect?
I encourage fellow readers to read everything. This story is worth it. Enjoy!!
It was already my everyday habit. My day would not be complete if i missed. I really enjoy reading this book. So suspense that I cant predict whats going to be happen next.
Good Book I just need more Chapters more more...........................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
If this is not picked then there's no need for the trial read section. This is awesome.
At first it was interesting but as the Novel goes on it just becomes more and more stupid.
Mc and all the other people was such a low IQ that it just makes me feel as if it is to forced.
I hope there is a Author with the same Novel idea but takes the Novel more serious
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