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This is my favourite novel. I can read it over and over again. Thank you author. I will be looking forward to book 2. I have been waiting long enough. I was told the first chapter of that was such a WOW!
I noticed u added and removed some words. I can vaguely remember it but reading it again made me recall. Please keep updating
I'm only at Chapter 80 but here goes:Translation Quality: It's good and mistakes can rarely be found unless one nit picks continuously.Stability Of Updates: Hasn't been updated in a while but it was previously good.Story Developement: Ok I'm in no rush for the mc to become powerful quickly but 80 chapters in, he hasn't changed and while the focus isn't on him alot, I feel like he should have become more powerful than the average human already and he barely does anything, most of the work is done by Bei Li with it starting out as a gag but slowly becoming annoying.Character Design: The character design is really unbalanced, while some have interesting backrounds, others exist for the sake of existing and if they were side characters it would be okay but some areheavily focused on. The worst is the mc, I tried to like him but it's impossible as he is supposedly the descendent of the king of Beiqi but he does NOTHING and relies on Bei Li who is the only really good character.World Backround: The world backround is really interesting as I can't wait for the Underworld Seas to be explored but at the same time, slighlty more focus on the real world as it would be interesting to see the authors take o how humanity developed in 200 odd years.I don't review often but needed to say this.Thank You
So, premium and not to mention privileged but still dropped the novel on a whim. 'Rebooted' they say. Just like the previous version?.This is a effing scam. Collect the money, dropped the novel, make a new one and the cycle repeats?Shame on you.
total garbagethe mc itself is totally stupid childish and immaturelike who the **** just rape a girl out of no wherelike what if the hydro member even rape a child woman like totally garbage i know that the current earth itself is horrible but at least woman this day have rights like sighh the author who wrote this just totally is sadistic horny and a power hungry dominating man
Petition to bring back nurturing humanity................................................................................................
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I liked this book a lot. The concept is good and for a few days I was wanting to read a book like this. There was no grammatical errors and the story line was good. I am gonna read this book more and even recommend it to others. Hats ? off to u author.
Its a good kind of slow-burn story. as it goes on you'd see setups that the author has planned in advance. It's a good book to get lost in, and with time it just gets better. I highly recommend it to those who want a good read. I only hope that by the time I catch up on the chapters, the story is ready to go. cheers!
A beautifully crafted story that has an experienced world background in it! The title seems to be more pleasing than you thought! Good job, author!
