It’s an okay book but the chapters are way to short to he considered a chapter. I’ll keep reading but I’m wasting my coins and coupons on this Fanfic
When will the next chapter be realist ??
Website : qidian china
Views : 12.30million
Rating : 9.3(673)
Chapters : 1500+
Status : completed
Word count : 4.88million
author level : platinum
No of works : 7
Disscussion : 32421
Year started : 2015
Chinese title : 人道至尊
I can't really say anything, it's a fun read. I recommend it. I know I said I'll give a proper review, but I really can't say anything. It's a solid read.
I didn't find any grammar errors that I can point out.
The character, in my opinion, is nothing special, there was some development, nothing crazy.
The world is nothing special, it's like real life.
The story is decent, it was fast-paced, but not rushed, and you can follow it without a problem.
Overall it's a decent, good read.
This novel is great until the 5th Volume started.
Writing Style: 4/5
The author is fluent in English, though occasionally making typos here and there. He has a good writing style, not seeming to break the immersion. My only real problem is the paragraph structure wherein paragraphs get too long.
World Background: 4/5
Background is great and well thought out. My only surprise is the mention of Mana reservoirs, seemingly unfitting for a life in modern society. There are also some inconsistencies in the world building here and there.
Character: 3/5
The characters would have been a 4/5 if not for Volume 5. Each character has their own unique personality. Though some like Noah were introduced abruptly, this was at the beginning segments. One character that was special was Luna. She was one of the genuinely interesting characters. She unlike the other girls had a genuine affinity with the MC. Unfortunately, the author decided to separate her in the name of Character Progression, which I disagree with. If not for what the author decided to make her do in Volume 4 and what was evident during Volume 5, I would have rated this a 4 or even a 5.
Story: 2/5
Same problems with the Characters segment. Vol 1 was consistent while Vol 2 was amazing. The ending was great. Honestly, the story could've ended there with my review on this with 4 for chara, 5 for story and even 5 for world, since inconsistencies started with Vol 4. Unfortunately, the author didn't seem to know that everything wouldn't change with 1 conversation. But it did and now the joy of reading this story is lost.
All in all, I'm dropping. The story doesn't have a lot of clichés but because of that, the story gets unnatural in parts where clichés naturally occur. I hope the author learns from this review.
Quite swell.
It has that nice laid-back feel, yet things still happen since mc works like flytrap.
I see that you choose Zero from Drakengard 3 for the cover, which is one of my favorite game… This is why I will read your story aha
The synopsis is something that a 7th grader would come up with. "In turn this led to" my ass. Seriously, the sypnosis is incredibly vague and lacking in substance. Frankly put, it is quite appalling for it's lack of charisma and word choice. If the translation or base material is at this level, then I don't hold much hope for this novel at all.
I was hooked up after reading the synopsis as well as 3 chapters of your novel. I loved the plots and it's quite intriguing.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I have to say I love the novel, the thing that stood out for me is the absence of a system that makes it much more realistic and engaging. the MC is very relatable, and the pacing of the story i quite good now. the one that I want is the frequency of the update[img=coins]
Really good, but slow on updates. Also very very wired conversations(the way they talk is not a way people do).
This better novel I gess it have some of mistakes but it can be solve i already have one day per chapter so it can manage ble I guess.this novel I like it