hehe, why am I reviewing my own work.wait come to think of it , actually it's not bad to review our work by myself well ,i feel soo much good to write this ><
eigthy or something chapter in, my problem is the mc, hes no cultivation killer, but he's soft, naive, and is painful to read.
this is a really interesting premise though.
As a translator, even if the translation is bad, at least please don't change people's names.
It's really annoying to see the changing character names
It is great idea and it could be a great story but shift this from 'novel' section to
'fanfic' section .. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Author please make some character growth for Lu Chen. I mean he is letting himself spitted by that bitch and his lover. And that dumb fatty is getting on my nerves. I mean fatty who is a rich kid is bootlicking long Chen without any background. And till this day I don't understand what that shrew had seen in this pretending to be moon light guy. In contrast MC is rich and devoted. If this harlot had said once to him about academics,then I am sure he would have done well in studies also. Just what is the problem of this slut to treat him like garbage.
Trash Quality Translation And Writing : Check
Bots spamming that the novel is really great : Check
Good idea but poorly executed : Check
Author Writing about something and then saying completely different:Check
Webnovel deleting actual reviews and replacing them with reviews bots make : Check
Copy of another novel : Check
Chinese author so means millions of chapters : Check
Gonna read it again later ?Not gonna happen
this novel makes me think of the original "Chrysalis". except that the latter is free and much more advanced ... on the other hand, there are more comedies in it which may displease ...
otherwise, since I have to rate this novel, it looks promising. So I hope to be able to read more ^^
Why was this novel not picked? I really wanted to read it....
I dont want to read about a child growing up being a idiot about everything he does. I want to read about an MC who knows their ****. If you want a slow read with a MC thats dumb as f@#$ here you go.
This is an amazing story with so many great fantasy and sci-fi factors that at times you can forget the setting is the "real" world set in modern day. A lot of work had to go into this novel and you can really tell. Theres so much history and myth from around the world and not just mainstream but also the versions you cant easily find and connecting them with the real world in amazing ways.
My only problem with the novel is that the author seems to have stopped writing for quite some time.
Oh and if you read everything here and want to keep going ********** has more chapters out for this novel.
hi,actually i just finished read TKA novel recently,and i really want to read about the world glory competition story as well as i really want to read ye xiu next story,so i felt really lucky got to read such amazing story as yours.i hope to see your next chapter...thank you in advance for your effort..ahh,i just got impatient to read next chapter..good luck and thank you.keep up the good work..i really like this story..i think that even i said it hundred times,my love for this story just won't stop..please keep update the story and don't stop halfway or else i will get heartbroken..i really like your plot and story..i just get the feeling that your story will be really wonderful so please don't stop and keep updating.thank you so much
Fun and exciting read with an equally fun and exciting protagonist. Zack is entertaining at times as well as being a badass. He's also different in character, and his role within the story is vastly different from what I often see in novels around Webnovel.
I appreciate the balance between the text that shows game elements and the story paragraphs. Everything is easy to read. I have yet to see more about the world, but I think there would be more to show in the future.
Looking forward to more chapters.