It could have been good but it's written like a middle school fan fiction by an author who slept through English classes. Either that or it's been through google translate. It doesn't seem to be translation though it's pretty strange. I can only assume the author is a teenager or child who understands how to spell but not how sentence struture works.
Better than the synopsis of the other 2...
I really hope they drop novels that are too long on the pool...
Those two romances seems like sh**...
Sorry to those who like romance but it's the true...
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Wowieee. Yes, wow. So good...Yep
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I love everything about this story and thank you Praise Kalu for giving me the right source to offset my stress for each day. I'm looking forward to the upload of many more chapters as we would follow along, respectable fan
Was already engrossed by the drama that the prolouge had given but then suddenly the MC was forced to use a female avatar...................................................... Error...... Not my type of story...
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Good storyline. Starting chapters are detailed and fascinating. Definitely going to recommend this. Keep up the good work author! Good luck !
This is my honest opinion on this book.
I enjoyed reading this book. The story was very enticing to read. Every chapter makes me want to read more. I don't recall finding any errors or flaws.It was a really fun read. Some parts really made me laugh my guts out.
I am a sucker for fantasy stories and this one is a real winner. Reading it, I could see the characters coming to life. If there was an adaptation, I would watch it. It's pretty cool. I've nothing negative to say about it. [img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend]
FIRST I WANT TO SAY THIS NOVEL IS BETTER THEN 3/4 OF THE NOVELS THAT CURRENTLY OCCUPY THE TOP 10 lol
[Now for my review]
I love everything about this novel starting with the cool Alpha male MC who is good with women, the unique system the MC gets by pushing himself past his limits to protect who he loves, the fun atmosphere and different kinds of characters, a completely different world background compared to other novels ive read, also the harem members stay relevant and you get to see great character development, the mixture of slice of life/action/fantasy/romance/adventure/harem/R18 all meshed together perfectly, another thing I love is how the author didn't follow the trend of making his MC a bashful/dense/lame protagonist like a lot of mcs these days, The MC acts realistic the way he follows his desires protects those he loves and is heartless to his enemies. If I was forced to say anything negative it would be I wish the novel got more then one chapter a day because I can't get enough.
Novel is quite bland. It is rarely enjoyable.The primary concern is that the writing quality is quite low. Author constantly pads the word count with completely nonsensical and useless information which has no impact on the story, coupled with repetition. You can have entire chapters that are nothing but fillers. I will give the most "on-the-nose" example (I just copy-pasted, this is really how it was written in the novel):"Well, my partner has performed some calculations, and he has determined that we will require ten million dollars to mass-produce this rifle. Will the government be willing to add three million dollars?" Poul inquired.Sherman paused for a moment, carefully considering the offer. "If we provide you with ten million dollars, you will be able to mass-produce this rifle. Is that correct?""Yes," Poul replied "we will need ten million dollars to mass-produce this rifle. Is the government willing to add three million dollars?" Poul asked.Sherman was silent for a moment, pondering the offer. "If we give you ten million dollars, you will be able to mass-produce that rifle. Is that what you are saying?"
It's just boring. MC's cheat doesn't really exist since we all know MC don't die since that'll end the story. So far just another cultivation climb without enough character development of both MC and side characters.