This work is an innovation for the cultivation novel, here MC has down to earth personality, MC doesn't go into seclusion, he teaches, and most importantly he doesn't have a system.He does have a Goldfinger exclusive to himself, and thankfully it's not something heaven-defying quirk.You who are reading my review should give it a try, this work will not disappoint you.What will disappoint you is the number of chapters you will finish every chapter and still want to have more.It would only solve one way that is author post more of his chapter more frequently.
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hey author I beg ????????????????? U PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, CONTINUE THIS NOVEL TO THE FINISH PLZ
Author here, Rating my novel to a just. story might progress slowly to build up his world, to nonesense chapters and into something worth reading, bare with me.. as for commenting, I won't be working the novel towards the readers suggestions, just a heads up
The author has a real hard-on for violating the fourth wall like the MC violates his women. But that's okay, because the whole book is born of fourth-wall-breaking author's notes from another book. Paranoid is funny, the lemon is appropriately sour, and he updates steadily.
Gonna say, this is one of the best VRMMO stories I've had the pleasure if reading, character is relatable and down to earth, but not to the point of being stepped on by others. Not prideful to the degree of tearing down what others build out of spite, and has a strong sense of loyalty to those who've done right by him. Might not sound like much in this context but the author does a great job following his characters adventures in an apathetic uncaring world with few Ray's of light to illuminate his path.
Next is story for me. Vaguely as I can without spoiling is that this story is in a well constructed world, both for the characters reality and the virtual reality, there isnt any good or bad people that most writers do their best to polarize and apply, the relationships and people of this book are just as complex and understandable as the main character. Everyone has their own reasons and are bound by their own circumstances, certainly their are a few scattered arrogant thugs but that run around in the story, but it's not all that impactful to the world, main character, or flown of the story,
So what I'm saying is that this story is well thought out and is very well constructed, its humorous, its tragic, its thrilling, its tense, it has a lot put into it and is an enjoyable read.
If I were to say anything bad about it, story release is chaotic at certain times, sometimes will be one a day or go to one a week. Changes quite a bit xD but I'll give it to the author anyway because the story maintains its quality, atleast to my eye.
Author i have to say you are very talented and you have a very bright future ahead of you in terms of being an author, i hope you have a successful life as an author and we, as the readers, sincerely wait for more of your wonderful creations.
I would have given a five but author has not been updating regularly. Please I need more updates
Dont judge or insult me, and I wont judge or insult you.
I'm here for both the plot and incest tag.
The idea of Demi-God Protagonist who desires revange against douch-bag Zeus, his own father.
And the idea that MC will actually against Olympian Gods is interesting.
This is really a nice book. Worth the read. Author don't drop this.
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I have read the author's previous book, Destiny Forged, and I have to say, I hope this book is on the same level. I hope for a few references between his old book and this one, but other than that, I feel this novel has nothing wrong with it.