bit.ly/3LyRF1N
Good stuff so far! The story is intriguing, but I recommend having a better description of events. I feel like you've heard this before but, "show, don't tell." Other than that, it's a good read
Haven't read it yet but that Synopsis and Comment is better than, lets be generous, 70% of the rest on this """wonderful""" app. Imma get reading and update this later. 5☆ for now :)
Hey!
Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
very good novel. It started with the introduction of divine spirit and a city. At first I thought it is a small city but then it turns out that the city is larger than half the Earth or the modern world he found himself awake in.
Very good novel so far as now I'm in chap 7. Only.
Pls come back, i need you. I need more chapters pls gimme them............fjdjdudhdociwhejfihsheigidbwjrofiehejfifiejhekfifkfjejdjfjgjfojebf
I've read up to chapter 600 or so and, like most of the stories here, it has potential but is wasted because everything comes too easy to the protagonist.Does he need to evolve? wild situation happens and he goes to the next level... Does he needs money? boom, a senior gives all of his money to him, or he finds part of a sect's minnning ground and has lots of spirit sones...The plot if filled with situations too convenient added to make him grow easily.
it's like saying Issac Newton discovered gravity so he was able to manipulate it, this story makes no sense. This is like the author wants to see him self as the MC of this story and is venting himself on people he couldn't in real life.
I was really enjoying this novel at the beginning. The mc was not swayed by beauty and while it is expected that love interests would come along, the way the character developed is terrible. Every female that is stronger than him plays with him like he is a toy. He has not backbone, helps women who scheme against him, and just caves in to anything females want. He forgives females pretty much instantly, while a male would get the most humiliating treatment.If you are looking to read a novel with one of the biggest simps on this platform, this is for you. Otherwise, avoid this like the plague. This review is at chapter 188.
Esta historia es patética, con un Mc demasiado débil, impulsivo, tonto. marica, en resumen de sentimientos débiles es muy frágil y no puede ver mas allá de todas las posibilidades que puede reunir a su favor lo ciegan las emociones, típica historia de mc, retrasado y asustadizo.
first of all, i will always make it free and upload like once a day right now i will do it like until 30 ish chapter ......................