I like the idea of this novel, in the beginning it was enjoyable but currently I'm in chapter 97 and it no longer existing, when he found out the the royal family has more mutant he didn't pursue down to the better lab to get it's data and equipment, when he found out you can make your own skill without wasting zombie money he just ignores it, I especially hate in the beginning were instead of chosing weapons mastery he chooses the plane route I just thought idiot. In conclusion I wish you would up the MC's intelligence by a lot.
This is just frustrating to read. First, all of the character names are mismatches of someone google searching "top 20 American first names" and "top 20 American last names". It is super frustrating to read when every single character has a name that I would expect to see as a place holder on a police report involving minors. Second is that it absurdly draws out conflicts. It is a constant seesaw between the MC getting harassed and then getting some form of minor revenge. There is also an absurd focus on side characters, even their POVs, considering we can be sure they aren't going to play any major role outside of the current conflict they are involved in with the MC. Speaking of conflict, this is another majorly frustrating aspect. The MC is described as a hardworking, kind, and loyal man. The entire novel is just him being defecated on repeatedly.
Great read sometimes makes you want to pull out your hAir And think how it should turn out just wish the Do 2 chapTers per day i would pay the same just be easyer and release ir ealyer 10pm is beD time and i try to say up to read but when i do it has my head racing and cant sleep
Amazing novels and the author is a very interactive in the comments and makes it enjoyable . This is not a translation but an original novel. The mc is a cautious person but not so much that it gets annoying . The mc is a fun joyful person and also his family is not dead . He does not blush or be embarrassed about romantic things and likes to flirt with his senior sister.
Just give the first 10 chapters a try
This story is alright. First thing you notice is writing quality, which is poor. It sounds like a non-native speaker wrote it.
I can't really comment on update stability, so I gave it 5 stars.
Story development is pretty basic, and I was hoping to feel...more. It's somewhat superficial and honestly required some deeper thought. MC's just running around completing tasks right now without thinking much. Honestly feeling a little bored.
Character is pretty basic. Props to actively choosing not to have a Harem.
World background is a little disappointing at this point in the story. There's random GM interference to make the journey harder for the MC. It seems highly unnecessary. Also, he decided to add Gods and God's apostles early and make the MC into one, which seems a bit much.
I don't know. Honestly just expect more, since the story has a lot of potential.
alright... this young man is full of indecision. The setting for this story is good, but you basically threw it out the window early on. James just seems like any other slightly experienced player if not a little less do to some questionable decisions. also i understand that his sister is sick and he needs to make 400k in a month, but he already has 300k in less than a day, so that canary has pretty much sung its song. His mentality also seems really weak for someone who reincarnated. On that note i think the story has potential it just needs some polishing and to stay on track with the focus points of the story.
This story is well thought out and has a good plot line. It's a very engaging post apocalyptic world that is going to go through another one. This story follows a family man as he avails himself of the opportunity contained in a 'game' while creating something that will last after they've left. Give this a try, you won't regret it.
Something that the author could improve on is grammar. It's not bad enough to adversely affect reading comprehension, but the mistakes do stick out.
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this kinda reminds me of
"Summoned to a parallel fantasy world many times"
in summary this Guy’s whole class gets summoned to another world, except he’s the only who one was transferred to a different one. Just when he gets used to his new life, he gets summoned to another world again, and again. how it works: each tine you were isekai'd you should've had 1 cheat but mc's condition even baffled the Goddess.
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The book has really bad grammar and the MC is extremely arrogant which gets him into bad scenarios .
Ok, I'm back after reading a few chapters; I really like the story, the writing is good, the grammar is good, the pacing is fine. It's not usually the story I'd go for, but I'm enjoying it.