Is there a system out there that genuinely doesn't want to low-key kill protagonists? I mean, all of them (mission-type systems) like to send MCs on dangerous missions that are sometimes even impossible to achieve if it wasn't for the plot armour, which is a saving grace for them. Trust me, if plot armour didn't exist, most protagonists would be killed by systems before even an enemy appears.
The author is an idiot. "All rights reserved". You don't even know what that means! Quote, "All rights reserved" is a copyright formality indicating that the copyright holder reserves, or holds for its own use, all the rights provided by copyright law.
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You don't have any of those rights. You copied it from Wuxia-world.
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I hope the story is as good as the rating I give. And hopefully, this novel story is not the same as RPS.
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Thanks.
Good start. Hope the novel gets even better later and the MC actually cares about others, of course not too much
PLEASE QIDIAN LORD QIDIAN GOD QIDIAN IMMORTAL QIDIAN CELESTIAL QIDIAN DIVINITY PLEASE I'M BEGGING U ON BEHALF OF MY FELLOW DAOIST CHANGE THE TRANSLATOR OR ANYTHINGI DON'T CARE JUST MAKES THE STABILITY UPDATES BETTER NOT JUST FROM 1- 3CH/WEEK..
PELEASE CULTIVATES A BETTER TRANSLATOR OR GIVE HIM SOME HEAVEN DEFYING MANUAL SO HE CAN TRANSLATE MORE CHAPTER!!!
I like this story a lot.
Stylish Demon can I help you by editing this story for you? I can help you fix it so the English is top-notch. I'll do it for free.
Love the story so far, and it holds a lot of potential, pls never drop.
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Loved your style of writing.. it feels like i was reading a translation novel XD (Unlike mine.. that feels like a fan-fic XD)
I always adored zombie apocalypse type of stories, like zombie sister strategy. So i'd probably read it more.
Amazing book , with clear and vivid narration about the situations and environment. Continue your hardwork author!
This story has a great potential to become a good read if develop properly. However, there is a part that is bugging me. The protagonist said that he will never log out. How on earth will he sustain his body? Did he not need to eat or go in the toilet or take a bath for hygiene? Will he not die from starvation? He will need to log out to do all of those. Please give us a proper explanation about it. Well it is all that I was asking about. Though, is this going to be an harem because I hate those.
I have been a fan of this Web novel since it came out loved every chapter it does take inspiration from bigger books but not in a bad way and though the update stability isn’t the best most starting writers and people in general don’ have enought time to write or don’t have enough ideas anyways it is an amazing Webnovel